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Bug#700702: timemachine: Typo's in description

Package: timemachine
Version: 0.3.3-1
Severity: minor

Dear Maintainer,

The short description:
"JACK audio recorder for spontaneous and conservatory use"

Should that really be "conservatory"? Even if it is supposed to be
"conservative", it still seems a bit odd.

In the long description:
"Timemachine writes the last 10 seconds of audio _before_ the button
press  and everything from now on up to the next button press into a WAV-file."

I suggest replace  "... from now on up ..." with "... from then on up ..."

Instead of "... when you heard an interesting noise ..." I suggest"
"... when you hear an interesting noise ..."

And finally in the final paragraph, instead of "... lets audio
application communicate with ..." I suggest "... lets audio applications
communicate with ..."

-- System Information:
Debian Release: 7.0
  APT prefers testing
  APT policy: (990, 'testing')
Architecture: i386 (i686)

Kernel: Linux 3.2.0-4-686-pae (SMP w/1 CPU core)
Locale: LANG=en_NZ.UTF-8, LC_CTYPE=en_NZ.UTF-8 (charmap=UTF-8)
Shell: /bin/sh linked to /bin/dash

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