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[BTS#677713] templates://ipsec-tools/{racoon.templates} : Final update for English review



Dear Debian maintainer,

On Saturday, June 16, 2012, I notified you of the beginning of a review process
concerning debconf templates for ipsec-tools.

The debian-l10n-english contributors have now reviewed these templates,
and the final proposed changes are attached to this update to the
original bug report.

Please review the suggested changes, and if you have any
objections, let me know in the next 3 days.

However, please try to avoid uploading ipsec-tools with these changes
right now.

The second phase of this process will begin on Sunday, July 01, 2012, when I will
coordinate updates to translations of debconf templates.

The existing translators will be notified of the changes: they will
receive an updated PO file for their language.

Simultaneously, a general call for new translations will be sent to
the debian-i18n mailing list.

Both these calls for translations will request updates to be sent as
individual bug reports. That will probably trigger a lot of bug
reports against your package, but these should be easier to deal with.

The call for translation updates and new translations will run until
about Sunday, July 22, 2012. Please avoid uploading a package with fixed or changed
debconf templates and/or translation updates in the meantime. Of
course, other changes are safe.

Please note that this is an approximative delay, which depends on my
own availability to process this work and is influenced by the fact
that I simultaneously work on many packages.

Around Monday, July 23, 2012, I will contact you again and will send a final patch
summarizing all the updates (changes to debconf templates,
updates to debconf translations and new debconf translations).

Again, thanks for your attention and cooperation.


-- 


# These templates have been reviewed by the debian-l10n-english
# team
#
# If modifications/additions/rewording are needed, please ask
# debian-l10n-english@lists.debian.org for advice.
#
# Even minor modifications require translation updates and such
# changes should be coordinated with translators and reviewers.

Template: racoon/config_mode
Type: select
__Choices: direct, racoon-tool
Default: direct
_Description: Configuration mode for racoon IKE daemon:
 Racoon can be configured either directly, by editing
 /etc/racoon/racoon.conf, or using the racoon-tool administrative front end.
 .
 Use of the "direct" method is strongly recommended if you want to use all
 the racoon examples on the Net, and if you want to use the full
 racoon feature set. You will have to directly edit /etc/racoon/racoon.conf and possibly
 manually set up the Security Policy Database via setkey.
 .
 Racoon-tool has been updated for racoon 0.8.0, and is for use in basic
 configuration setups. It gives the benefit of managing the SPD along with the
 IKE that strongSwan offers. IPv6, transport/tunnel mode (ESP/AH), PSK/X509
 auth, and basic "anonymous" VPN server are supported.
 .
 More information is available in /usr/share/doc/racoon/README.Debian.
Source: ipsec-tools
Section: net
Priority: extra
Maintainer: Matthew Grant <matthewgrant5@gmail.com>
Build-Depends: debhelper (>=7.0.50~), flex, bison, libkrb5-dev, libssl-dev (>= 0.9.6), libpam0g-dev, po-debconf, chrpath, hardening-wrapper, libldap2-dev
Standards-Version: 3.9.3
Vcs-Git: git://anonscm.debian.org/collab-maint/ipsec-tools.git
Vcs-Browser: http://anonscm.debian.org/gitweb/?p=collab-maint/ipsec-tools.git
Homepage: http://ipsec-tools.sourceforge.net/

Package: ipsec-tools
Architecture: any
Depends: ${shlibs:Depends}, ${misc:Depends}
Description: IPsec utilities
 IPsec (Internet Protocol security) offers end-to-end security for
 network traffic at the IP layer.
 .
 This package is a Linux port of the utilities from the KAME IPsec
 implementation on BSD.

Package: racoon
Architecture: any
Provides: ike-server
Conflicts: ike-server
Depends: ${misc:Depends}, ${shlibs:Depends}, ipsec-tools (= ${binary:Version}), debconf (>= 0.2.26) | debconf-2.0, adduser, ${perl:Depends}
Description: IPsec Internet Key Exchange daemon
 IPsec (Internet Protocol security) offers end-to-end security for
 network traffic at the IP layer.
 .
 This package is a Linux port of the IKE server from the KAME IPsec
 implementation on BSD.
--- ipsec-tools.old/debian/racoon.templates	2012-06-16 13:01:04.066652712 +0200
+++ ipsec-tools/debian/racoon.templates	2012-06-28 08:01:34.132496773 +0200
@@ -1,22 +1,28 @@
+# These templates have been reviewed by the debian-l10n-english
+# team
+#
+# If modifications/additions/rewording are needed, please ask
+# debian-l10n-english@lists.debian.org for advice.
+#
+# Even minor modifications require translation updates and such
+# changes should be coordinated with translators and reviewers.
+
 Template: racoon/config_mode
 Type: select
 __Choices: direct, racoon-tool
-# The above choices have to be left as they are as the values are used directly
-# in the postinst script.  They do not need translation.
-# Please explain what they are in any rewritten description.
 Default: direct
-_Description: Configuration mode for racoon IKE daemon.
- Racoon can be configured two ways, either by directly editing
- /etc/racoon/racoon.conf or using the racoon-tool administrative front end.
+_Description: Configuration mode for racoon IKE daemon:
+ Racoon can be configured either directly, by editing
+ /etc/racoon/racoon.conf, or using the racoon-tool administrative front end.
  .
  Use of the "direct" method is strongly recommended if you want to use all
- the racoon examples on the Net, and if you want to use the fuul racoon feature
- set.  You will have to directly edit /etc/racoon/racoon.conf and possibly
- manually set up the SPD via setkey.
+ the racoon examples on the Net, and if you want to use the full
+ racoon feature set. You will have to directly edit /etc/racoon/racoon.conf and possibly
+ manually set up the Security Policy Database via setkey.
  .
- Racoon-tool has been refreshed for racoon 0.8.0, and is for use in basic
+ Racoon-tool has been updated for racoon 0.8.0, and is for use in basic
  configuration setups. It gives the benefit of managing the SPD along with the
- IKE that Strongswan offers. IPv6, transport/tunnel mode (ESP/AH), PSK/X509
- auth and basic 'anonymous' VPN server are supported.
+ IKE that strongSwan offers. IPv6, transport/tunnel mode (ESP/AH), PSK/X509
+ auth, and basic "anonymous" VPN server are supported.
  .
- More information is available in /usr/share/doc/racoon/README.Debian
+ More information is available in /usr/share/doc/racoon/README.Debian.
--- ipsec-tools.old/debian/control	2012-06-16 13:01:04.070652791 +0200
+++ ipsec-tools/debian/control	2012-06-16 23:09:55.757777992 +0200
@@ -11,17 +11,21 @@
 Package: ipsec-tools
 Architecture: any
 Depends: ${shlibs:Depends}, ${misc:Depends}
-Description: IPsec tools for Linux
- IPsec-Tools is a port of the KAME IPsec utilities for Linux. It can be
- used with the ipsec implementation in 2.6 and later kernels or with
- the 2.4 backport of the ipsec changes.
+Description: IPsec utilities
+ IPsec (Internet Protocol security) offers end-to-end security for
+ network traffic at the IP layer.
+ .
+ This package is a Linux port of the utilities from the KAME IPsec
+ implementation on BSD.
 
 Package: racoon
 Architecture: any
 Provides: ike-server
 Conflicts: ike-server
 Depends: ${misc:Depends}, ${shlibs:Depends}, ipsec-tools (= ${binary:Version}), debconf (>= 0.2.26) | debconf-2.0, adduser, ${perl:Depends}
-Description: IPsec IKE keying daemon
- racoon is the KAME IKE (ipsec key exchange) server. It can be used with
- the Linux ipsec implementation in 2.6 and later kernels or with
- the 2.4 backport of the ipsec changes.
+Description: IPsec Internet Key Exchange daemon
+ IPsec (Internet Protocol security) offers end-to-end security for
+ network traffic at the IP layer.
+ .
+ This package is a Linux port of the IKE server from the KAME IPsec
+ implementation on BSD.

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