Bug#678257: Typos in package description, rewording proposal

[Martin Eberhard Schauer <Martin.E.Schauer@gmx.de>]

Package: freediams
Version: 0.7.4-2
Severity: wishlist
X-Debbugs-CC: debian-l10n-english@lists.debian.org

Dear Debian Med Packagers,

I think that I found some typos in the package description. Also
I would like to suggest some minor wording changes.

The status quo (1)

   Description: Pharmaceutical drugs prescriptor and interactions checker
    The FreeMedForms project is a set of free and open source
    medical application used to help health professionals
    in their current practice.
    It is developed by a international community of medical
    doctors and computer workers.
    .
    FreeDiams is a pharmaceutical drug prescriptor assistant.
    It can be used to creation complex prescription and to manage
    drugs interactions.

For me a project is a group of persons working on a task. So it can't be
a collection of applications. Debian is free - so free and open source
are redundant.

My proposal:

   Description: Pharmaceutical drugs prescriptor and interactions checker
    The FreeMedForms project maintains a set of medical applications
    used to help health professionals in their current practice.
    It is developed by an international community of medical doctors
    and computer specialists.
    .
    FreeDiams is a pharmaceutical drug prescriptor assistant.
    It can be used to create complex prescriptions and to handle
    drugs interactions.

Kind regards,
   Martin

P.S.: Greetings from "South Lower Saxony" to the Harz.

1:http://ddtp.debian.net/ddt.cgi?desc_id=129993