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Review of trophy package description



Hello,

I am the maintainer of the "trophy" package and have been asked to
improve my package description.

This is the current description:

Description: 2D car racing action game
Trophy is a single-player racing game for Linux. Even though the goal is
basically to finish the laps as the first, Trophy is an action game
which offers much more than just a race. Lots of extras enable "unusual"
features for races such as shooting, putting mines and many others.

This package contains the executable.

I was thinking about changing the description to:

Description: 2D car racing action game
Trophy is a single-player racing game for Linux, which combines elements
from traditional race and action games. Lots of available extras enable
features such as shooting, mines, barrels and many others.

This package contains the executable.

Does that look like a OK description?

The upstream description is at
http://trophy.sourceforge.net/index.php?body=about

Thanks for any help!

Cheers,

  Andreas

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