On Fri, Jun 03, 2011 at 06:24:19PM +0100, Justin B Rye wrote: > Jan Hauke Rahm wrote: > > Template: bacula-fd/password > > Type: password > > _Description: Password for the bacula file daemon: > ^ > The .deb and the executable are all lowercase, but the system as a > whole is "Bacula", so it should probably be titlecased here. It > would also be helpful if this password was described in a way that > couldn't be misunderstood as referring to the following one - maybe: > > _Description: Password for accessing the Bacula file daemon: > > > To be able to connect to this daemon a password needs to be set. Please > > provide one here. > > Grammar pedants will say this means that it's the password that > connects to the daemon; shut them up with: > > For clients to be able to connect to this daemon a password needs to be set. > Please provide one here. > > Or more simply: > > Please specify a password to allow clients to connect to the Bacula > file daemon. > > > . > > If you leave the field empty, no password will be set. On new installations > > the daemon will then be deactivated to make sure the daemon is not started > > without a password. > > > > Template: bacula-fd/mon-password > > Type: password > > _Description: Password for the bacula file daemon monitor: > ^ > This makes it sound as if it's a password that gives something-or-other access > to the monitor. Should it be: > > _Description: Password for monitoring the Bacula file daemon: > > > Restricted access can also be established to this daemon (for instance from > > the bacula-tray-monitor util). For that a password needs to be set. Please > > provide one here. > > I'm not keen on the "also" (as well as what?) or the abbreviation > "util" (uncommon in the singular). As well as regular access, restricted access can also ... That was what I meant. > This phrasing makes it sound as if bacula-tray-monitor was a way of > restricting access to the Bacula file daemon. Presumably you want > something more like: > > Please specify a password to allow monitoring utilities such as > the bacula-tray-monitor to connect to the Bacula file daemon. Better, obviously. > > . > > If you leave the field empty, no password will be set. On new installation the > ^s > > daemon will then be deactivated to make sure the daemon is not started without > > a password. > > Missing S. Does it really cripple the daemon unless you set *both* > passwords? Interesting case actually. I don't know. I'll investigate. Thank you very much, Justin. Perfect and fast review, as usual. I'm gonna take everything, to go please... Hauke -- .''`. Jan Hauke Rahm <jhr@debian.org> www.jhr-online.de : :' : Debian Developer www.debian.org `. `'` Member of the Linux Foundation www.linux.com `- Fellow of the Free Software Foundation Europe www.fsfe.org
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