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Re: [RFR] templates://dokuwiki/{templates}



Tanguy Ortolo wrote:
> Dear English localization team,
> 
> Please find, for review, the last added debconf templates section for
> my dokuwiki package.
> 
> This review will last to Thursday, March 10, 2011.
> 
> I would prefer that you send reviews as full replacement text.

Inline or attached?  Oh well, have both plus a diff.
 
> -----------------------------------------------------------------------
> Template: dokuwiki/wiki/license
> Type: select
> __Choices: cc-zero, cc-by, cc-by-sa, gnufdl, cc-by-nc, cc-by-nc-sa
> Default: cc-by-sa
> _Description: Wiki license:
>  Please choose the license you want to apply to your wiki content.
>  .
>  CC0 is designed to waive as many rights as legally possible.
>  .
>  CC Attribution is a permissive license that only requires licensees to
>  give credits to the author.
>  .
>  CC Attribution-Share Alike and GNU Free Documentation License are
>  copyleft-based free licenses.
>  .
>  CC Attribution-Noncommercial and CC Attribution-Noncommercial-Share Alike
>  are non-free licenses that forbid commercial uses.
> -----------------------------------------------------------------------

Two language tweaks: "give credit" and "commercial use" are fixed
expressions and don't need the plural.

This never states that CC means "Creative Commons"; probably we should
expand them more (CC0 being "No Rights Reserved").  Giving both forms
would also help tie together "Attribution" and "cc-by".

CC.org consistently uses camelcase for NonCommercial and ShareAlike,
and writes "CC BY-NC-SA", so I suppose we should too in the text.

-----------------------------------------------------------------------
Template: dokuwiki/wiki/license
Type: select
__Choices: cc-zero, cc-by, cc-by-sa, gnufdl, cc-by-nc, cc-by-nc-sa
Default: cc-by-sa
_Description: Wiki license:
 Please choose the license you want to apply to your wiki content.
 .
 CC0 (Creative Commons "No Rights Reserved") is designed to waive as
 many rights as legally possible.
 .
 CC BY (Creative Commons Attribution) is a permissive license that
 only requires licensees to give credit to the author.
 .
 CC BY-SA (Creative Commons Attribution-ShareAlike) and the GNU Free
 Documentation License are copyleft-based free licenses.
 .
 CC BY-NC and BY-NC-SA (Creative Commons Attribution-NonCommercial and
 Attribution-NonCommercial-ShareAlike) are non-free licenses that
 forbid commercial use.
-----------------------------------------------------------------------

(Crushing it into a bulleted list would only save space if we didn't
give the options a bullet each.)
-- 
JBR	with qualifications in linguistics, experience as a Debian
	sysadmin, and probably no clue about this particular package
Template: dokuwiki/wiki/license
Type: select
__Choices: cc-zero, cc-by, cc-by-sa, gnufdl, cc-by-nc, cc-by-nc-sa
Default: cc-by-sa
_Description: Wiki license:
 Please choose the license you want to apply to your wiki content.
 .
 CC0 (Creative Commons "No Rights Reserved") is designed to waive as
 many rights as legally possible.
 .
 CC BY (Creative Commons Attribution) is a permissive license that
 only requires licensees to give credit to the author.
 .
 CC BY-SA (Creative Commons Attribution-ShareAlike) and the GNU Free
 Documentation License are copyleft-based free licenses.
 .
 CC BY-NC and BY-NC-SA (Creative Commons Attribution-NonCommercial and
 Attribution-NonCommercial-ShareAlike) are non-free licenses that
 forbid commercial use.
--- old	2011-02-24 20:52:59.429259238 +0000
+++ new	2011-02-24 20:52:21.740921087 +0000
@@ -5,13 +5,15 @@
 _Description: Wiki license:
  Please choose the license you want to apply to your wiki content.
  .
- CC0 is designed to waive as many rights as legally possible.
+ CC0 (Creative Commons "No Rights Reserved") is designed to waive as
+ many rights as legally possible.
  .
- CC Attribution is a permissive license that only requires licensees to
- give credits to the author.
+ CC BY (Creative Commons Attribution) is a permissive license that
+ only requires licensees to give credit to the author.
  .
- CC Attribution-Share Alike and GNU Free Documentation License are
- copyleft-based free licenses.
+ CC BY-SA (Creative Commons Attribution-ShareAlike) and the GNU Free
+ Documentation License are copyleft-based free licenses.
  .
- CC Attribution-Noncommercial and CC Attribution-Noncommercial-Share Alike
- are non-free licenses that forbid commercial uses.
+ CC BY-NC and BY-NC-SA (Creative Commons Attribution-NonCommercial and
+ Attribution-NonCommercial-ShareAlike) are non-free licenses that
+ forbid commercial use.

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