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Re: [RFR] templates://wvdial/{wvdial.templates}



Jonathan Wiltshire wrote:
> Your review should be sent as an answer to this mail.

The only thing I could find to complain about was:

>  Package: wvdial
>  Architecture: any
>  Depends: ppp (>= 2.3.0), debconf (>= 0.5.00) | cdebconf, ${shlibs:Depends}, ${misc:Depends}
> -Description: PPP dialer with built-in intelligence
> +Description: intelligent point-to-point protocol (PPP) dialer

This is right; but the attached control file has:

> Description: intelligent point-to-point (PPP) dialer
       
missing the third P.  Alternatively if this is getting a bit long (and
given that an abbreviation you need to expand isn't much use) you
might say:

  Description: intelligent Point-to-Point Protocol dialer

But I haven't done that, so no need for a patch!
-- 
JBR	with qualifications in linguistics, experience as a Debian
	sysadmin, and probably no clue about this particular package
Source: wvdial
Section: comm
Priority: optional
Maintainer: Thierry Randrianiriana <thierry@debian.org>
Build-Depends: debhelper (>= 7), libwvstreams-dev (>= 4.4.1), pkg-config, po-debconf
Standards-Version: 3.9.1
Homepage: http://alumnit.ca/wiki/index.php?page=WvDial

Package: wvdial
Architecture: any
Depends: ppp (>= 2.3.0), debconf (>= 0.5.00) | cdebconf, ${shlibs:Depends}, ${misc:Depends}
Description: intelligent point-to-point protocol (PPP) dialer
 WvDial sacrifices some of the flexibility of programs like "chat" in order
 to make dialup configuration easier. With WvDial,
 the modem is detected automatically and only three additional parameters
 are required: the telephone number, username, and password. WvDial knows
 enough to dial with most modems and log in to most servers without any
 other help.
 .
 In particular, a "chat script" is not required to handle the most common
 situations.

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