Re: Manpage pyksoko, could you have a look
-----BEGIN PGP SIGNED MESSAGE-----
Hash: SHA1
On 07/20/10 20:20, Justin B Rye wrote:
> manuel wrote:
>> I'm currently in the process of packageing pyksoko for the PAPT.
>>
>> Its my first package so everything is quite new for me. The PAPT
>> recommended that you have a look at the manpage.
>>
>> Could you read over the manpage and give some hints please.
>
> Okay.
>
Thanks
> [...]
>> .SH NAME
>> pyksoko \- logic game with KDE sokoban skin/levels based on sokoban
>
> Is it a "logic game based on sokoban" or does it have "levels based
> on sokoban"? And what's going on in the middle there with that
> "skin/levels" part? Reading ahead I deduce you mean
>
> pyksoko \- logic game based on skoban with skin and levels from KDE
>
> But with only one skin and multiple levels that's still a bit
> awkward. Couldn't you just trim it down to:
>
> pyksoko \- logic game based on KSokoban
>
> and leave the details for later?
>
ok
>> .SH DESCRIPTION
>
> (What no SYNOPSIS? I've inserted a minimalist one, though its nroff
> may need tweaking.)
>
What should be there ?
>
> I'm not quite sure what that first sentence is trying to say. Isn't
> sokoban always "based around a warehouse"? How does a modern
> warehouse look different from an old-fashioned one?
>
It is but the whole game is themed like you would work in a warehouse.
> Common nouns like "levels" aren't normally capitalised in English.
>
> The game also has a "modern" skin, and over 5000 levels.
>
Yes i was referring to the KDE 3.5 as the old one but i changed it to
"there is also another skin available"
> (Or does that need to be ``modern'' or something?)
>
>>
Thanks for helping with the man page :-D
Manuel
-----BEGIN PGP SIGNATURE-----
Version: GnuPG v1.4.10 (GNU/Linux)
Comment: Using GnuPG with Mozilla - http://enigmail.mozdev.org/
iQEcBAEBAgAGBQJMRjlqAAoJEIb1jE/qO64g0gkH/3Zg7b9hX4xS27PmhDm9YNga
C3vHqANTK2IikDZEP+M4nwStvM8W1+TT/zJjAHG7g3Bu+rcWf9cVpYLmxrE5Gid5
ZnJOLhR8l/tow7VlPfpOVPzOVrwhTiFvW1l5sXB28G86JkNc7x3B8svjz+MOpO0+
johrilhJwHe0pkjT1kbFkWexv9jcWIQAg+Xlnt1rjG6or2fDbS1gSjlXRqtmnnBp
P3sxKMtAFbAjtjDzqWArjEk1Lur9d+bfAQmQF0Fv6giExjHKkbXEFVm+3IACxyms
IF8Pd+0V+g4La5qPs5IbwWhZYmQeQeptqzq7EaUeQtSaiQpw9JZr7Ux/1xPJdz4=
=7ucx
-----END PGP SIGNATURE-----
Reply to: