On Thu, Jul 01, 2010 at 11:56:46PM +0100, Justin B Rye wrote:
> Jonathan Wiltshire wrote:
> > Your review should be sent as an answer to this mail.
>
> You wait for weeks and then two come along at once.
Yep, sorry about that :)
> > --- ../moodle.old/debian/templates 2010-06-23 12:22:47.000000000 +0100
> > +++ debian/templates 2010-07-01 19:47:26.000000000 +0100
>
> It does seem a bit backwards that we're talking about what the user
> doing the accessing "should" do (in the passive voice). Couldn't we
> say something like:
>
> Please enter the URL that Moodle should serve pages on.
>
> (Or maybe "the URL on which Moodle should serve pages"?)
I think the second is better, but I always have the impression of a web
site being a place and I think that's common (though it's only anecdotal of
course). So how about:
Please enter the URL from which Moodle should serve pages.
Christian might be able to say which is more easily translated, if any.
> > + The installer will not configure your web server, but it
> > + will provide a basic configuration template for the Apache
> > + web server.
>
> It's not necessarily "my" web server, and (thanks to
Yup, missed that one...
> dpkg-reconfigure) the code may not be executing as an "installer".
>
> .
> Moodle does not perform any automatic web server configuration,
> but does provide basic configuration templates for Apache.
...and that's a much better sentence, thanks.
> > Description: Course Management System for Online Learning
> c m s o l
>
> But the long description looks fine (except that I seem to have
> automatically trimmed some trailing whitespace).
Ok, included.
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