Quoting Justin B Rye (jbr@edlug.org.uk):
> If this is a choice of either apache2 or nothing, why multiselect?
> Just to leave room for expansion? At present the fact it talks
> about "web server(S)" is a bit confusing.
Agreed. I guess, this is inherited from the days where choices were
often "apache, apache-ssl, apache2".
Some other packages do offer lighttpd as a web server to
configure automatically (we just had a review for simbad, with it, for
instance). So, Tanguy, you might want to consider whether it's
possible to use automatic configuration with lighttpd.
>
> > Template: dokuwiki/system/restart-webserver
> > Type: boolean
> > Default: true
> > _Description: Should the webserver(s) be restarted now?
> ^
> The recommended newbie-friendly spelling makes it two words.
>
> > In order to activate the new configuration, the reconfigured web
> > server(s) have to be restarted.
>
> Giving optionally-plural "web server(s)" plural agreement ("have")
> is legal but again confusing.
>
> > Template: dokuwiki/system/documentroot
> > Type: string
> > _Description: Wiki location:
> > DokuWiki will be accessible through a directory of your website.
> > By default, this is http://yourserver/dokuwiki, but you can
> > change it to be anything within your server. Enter just the directory
> > portion below.
> > Default: /dokuwiki
>
> If it's running on serverbox1.lan, even /proc is "within my server",
> and I'm pretty sure I can't put it there - only below the webroot.
> Also, no need to state the default, which is already there in the
> text entry box... but is it guaranteed that it'll appear "below"?
> How about just:
>
> Specify the directory below the server's docroot from which
> DokuWiki should be accessible.
Maybe s/docroot/document root
> > Template: dokuwiki/system/accessible
> > Type: select
> > _Description: Authorized network:
> > A Wiki is normally used to provide unlimited access to information, which
> ^
> > can be freely modified by anyone. Since this is not always wanted,
> > it is possible to restrict access to the site on the basis of the
> > originating IP address.
>
> Wikipedia say lowercase "wiki". Here's a more concise phrasing:
>
> Wikis normally provide open access to their content, allowing anyone
> to modify it. Alternatively, access can be restricted by IP address.
Agreed.
> > Template: dokuwiki/wiki/password
> > Type: password
> > _Description: Administrator password:
> > Please choose a password for the wiki administrator.
> >
> > Template: dokuwiki/wiki/confirm
> > Type: password
> > _Description: Password confirmation:
> > Please enter the same password again to verify
> > you have typed it correctly.
> >
> > Template: dokuwiki/wiki/failpass
> > Type: error
> > _Description: Password confimation failed!
> > The passwords do not match, please type them again.
>
> Comma splice - make it two sentences.
Also avoid exclamation marks, please.
These very common templates should be identical in all packages.
Taking simba as example:
_Description: Administrator password:
Please choose a password for the wiki administrator.
_Description: Re-enter password to verify:
Please enter the same "admin" password again to verify
you have typed it correctly.
Type: error
_Description: Password input error
The two passwords you entered were not the same. Please try again.
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