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Re: [LCFC] templates://isdnutils/{ipppd.templates,isdnlog.templates,isdnutils-b ase.templates,isdnvboxserver.templates}

Christian Perrier wrote:
> This is the last call for comments for the review of debconf
> templates for isdnutils.

One problem I missed last time and one I created.

> Template: isdnlog/country
> _Description: Country:
>  Please choose the local country. This will be used to set the rate table to
>  use for calculating the calls costs

That's some sort of broken possessive.  Make it:

   use for calculating the costs of calls.
> Package: isdnactivecards
> Description: ISDN utilities - active ISDN card support
>  This package provides firmware and firmware-loading utilities for active
>  ISDN cards (the Eicon, Eicon Diva, ICN, IBM Active 2000, or PCBIT-D cards).
                                      ^^   ^^
Oops, failed alphabetical ordering.

   ISDN cards (the Eicon, Eicon Diva, IBM Active 2000, ICN, or PCBIT-D cards).
JBR	with qualifications in linguistics, experience as a Debian
	sysadmin, and probably no clue about this particular package

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