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Re: [RFR2] templates://ufw/{templates}

Jonathan Wiltshire wrote:
> + If enabled, the rules you are about to set will take immediate
> + effect, and will be enabled during startup so that this host is protected
> + as early as possible. Alternatively, you may start ufw manually but this host
> + will not be protected until you do so.
> It's a little more long-winded but avoids any mention of yes and no.
> Justin: is the comma after 'Alternatively' in the right place or should it
> move to after 'manually'?

I'd put commas in both places, but that might drive readers
comatose... how about:

    as early as possible. You may start ufw manually instead, but this host
JBR	with qualifications in linguistics, experience as a Debian
	sysadmin, and probably no clue about this particular package

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