On Sat, May 09, 2009 at 10:24:15AM +0100, Justin B Rye wrote: > [...] > > If you don't restart strongSwan now, you should do so yourself at the first > > opportunity. > > That last paragraph doesn't quite make sense - it can either be done > by "you" or by "you yourself"? Change the first half to "if you > don't let strongSwan strongSwan now" or the second half to "you > should do so manually", or both, or something. I've changed it to the latter. I considered that wording before, but it felt a bit unwieldy - but at least it makes sense :) > > Package: strongswan-ikev2 > [...] > > StrongSwan is an IPsec- based VPN solution for the Linux kernel. It uses the > ^ Good catch, thanks. -- Jonathan Wiltshire PGP/GPG: 0xDB800B52 / 4216 F01F DCA9 21AC F3D3 A903 CA6B EA3E DB80 0B52
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