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Fix typo in DPN 6.



Hi folks!

While translating the 6th issue of DPN, I found out a few mistakes...
Please find attached a diff with some fixes.

Let's say people are not accustomed to abbreviations, so I added the
long version for l10n and i18n.

Regards,

-- 
Olaf'
--- index.wml	2008-07-13 16:00:13.951425319 +0200
+++ olaf.index.wml	2008-07-13 16:08:44.347426347 +0200
@@ -32,10 +32,10 @@
 <p>Steve McIntyre further noticed that many of Debian's longest-standing
 developers are very overworked but most are still happy about their Debian
 work. Considering individual teams the Perl team turned out to be the one with
-the most positive feedback, while i18n and l10n teams tend to be rather
-informally organized, but are still working well. The porter teams are
-especially short of manpower and are urgently looking for skilled people.</p>
-
+the most positive feedback, while internationalization (<em>i18n</em>) and
+localization (<em>l10n</em>) teams tend to be rather informally organized, but
+are still working well. The porter teams are especially short of manpower and
+are urgently looking for skilled people.</p>
 
 <p><strong>Bits from the Testing Security Team</strong></p>
 <p>Nico Golde <a href="http://lists.debian.org/debian-devel-announce/2008/06/msg00006.html";>sent bits from the testing security team</a>.
@@ -104,9 +104,9 @@
 Thsi marks the first time two Debian Developers were joined in marriage. 
 <a href="http://www.alphascorpii.net/wed/DDs.jpg";>Several other DDs</a>, one of whom served as the groom's best man,
 were present to celebrate with Meike's and Alexander's friends and families. As a wedding gift they
-presented a cookbook including the favourite recipes of many members of the Debian community. Version
-1.1 of the book is already in the works, hopefully with a clarified license and maybe also incorporating
-changes required by FTBFS bugs if any are filed by the newlyweds in time. The Debian project's
+presented a cookbook including the favourite recipes of many members of the
+Debian community. Version 1.1 of the book is already in the works, hopefully with a clarified license and maybe also incorporating
+changes required by FTBFS bugs if any are filed by the newly weds in time. The Debian project's
 congratulations go out to the happy couple, and we hope this may be the start of a very joyful
 time in both their lives.</p>
 
@@ -115,8 +115,9 @@
 
 <p>The 9th issue of the <a href="http://lists.debian.org/debian-devel-announce/2008/07/msg00000.html";>miscellaneous news for developers</a>
 has been released and covers the following topics: advice on quilt usage and compatibility with new source format;
-update-grub's switch to using UUIDs by default, the wxwidgets2.8 upload to unstable; and a 
-volunteers needed to handle the updating of the of release notes.</p>
+update-grub's switch to using UUIDs by default; the wxwidgets2.8 upload to
+unstable; and volunteers needed to handle the updating of the release
+notes.</p>
 
 <p>Dann Frazier <a href="http://lists.debian.org/debian-doc/2008/06/msg00142.html";>asked for reviews</a> of the release
 notes of the upcoming release of Debian GNU/Linux 4.0r4.  Since this point release will optionally support
@@ -124,8 +125,8 @@
 
 <p>Johannes Wiedersich <a href="http://lists.debian.org/debian-devel/2008/07/msg00049.html";>wondered</a> what
 to do with bug reports closed by spam e-mails.  Lars Wirzenius
-<a href="http://lists.debian.org/debian-devel/2008/07/msg00050.html";>pointed out</a>, that spam mails should be reported
-(e.g., via the web interface) so they can be removed, and the bugs should be reopened (and unarchived if necessary) using
+<a href="http://lists.debian.org/debian-devel/2008/07/msg00050.html";>pointed out</a> that spam mails should be reported
+(e.g. via the web interface) so they can be removed, and the bugs should be reopened (and unarchived if necessary) using
 the mail interface.</p>
 
 

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