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Re: [RFR] templates://anthy/{anthy.templates}



> Your review should be sent as an answer to this mail.

In the templates file:
>   The anthy package can use add-on dictionaries to the system
> + dictionary. The following dictionaries are currently available:

That might be better as

    The anthy package can use add-on dictionaries supplementary to the system
    dictionary. The following are currently available:

> +  - base.t : Anthy specific words which are compatible with cannadic;
> +  - extra.t: Anthy specific words which are not compatible with cannadic;

Hyphenate Anthy-specific.

> +  - 2ch.t  : Dialects used in 2ch, the biggest Japanese web discussion group.

Given that the other two admit to being wordlists, it seems unlikely
that 2ch.t contains entire "dialects"!  As far as I can tell it
doesn't even mean words from regional dialects, it means informal
jargon terms like these: 
"http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/2ch#Common_abbreviations_and_phrases"; 

It could even say:

     - 2ch.t  : Slang used on 2ch.net, the web's biggest discussion forum.

In the control file:
> +Description: input method for Japanese language - backend, dictionary and utility

No need for "language".

> + Anthy is a Japanese input method working on X11 and Emacs. It converts
>   Hiragana text to Kana Kanji mixed text. It is implemented as a library

That is, it converts "hiragana" (syllabic characters) to "mixed kana
and kanji" (normal written Japanese), right?

> + and stores users' private information into their own home directory.

Static storage; s/into/in/.

Oh, and:
> +Description: input method for Japanese language - elisp fronted
                                                                 ^
Typo: s/fronted/frontend/.
-- 
JBR	with qualifications in linguistics, experience as a Debian
	sysadmin, and probably no clue about this particular package
--- ../anthy.old/debian/anthy.templates	2008-01-26 17:14:45.000000000 +0000
+++ debian/anthy.templates	2008-01-26 19:29:26.000000000 +0000
@@ -3,9 +3,9 @@
 Choices: ${dictionaries}
 Default: base.t, extra.t
 _Description: Add-on dictionaries to use:
- The anthy package can use add-on dictionaries to the system
- dictionary. the following dictionaries are currently available:
+ The anthy package can use add-on dictionaries supplementary to the system
+ dictionary. The following are currently available:
  .
-  base.t: Anthy specific words which are compatible with cannadic.
-  extra.t: Anthy specific words which are not compatible with cannadic.
-  2ch.t: Dialects used in 2ch, the biggest Japanese web discussion group.
+  - base.t : Anthy-specific words which are compatible with cannadic;
+  - extra.t: Anthy-specific words which are not compatible with cannadic;
+  - 2ch.t  : Slang used on 2ch.net, the web's biggest discussion forum.
--- ../anthy.old/debian/control	2008-01-26 17:14:45.000000000 +0000
+++ debian/control	2008-01-26 19:31:03.000000000 +0000
@@ -10,47 +10,49 @@
 Replaces: anthy-cannadic, anthy-cannadic-2ch
 Depends: ${shlibs:Depends}, ${misc:Depends}
 Conflicts: anthy-cannadic, anthy-cannadic-2ch
-Description: A Japanese input method (backend, dictionary and utility)
- Anthy is a Japanese input method working on X11 and emacs. It converts
- Hiragana text to Kana Kanji mixed text. It is implemented as a library
- and stores user's private information into their own home directory.
- Thus, Anthy is simple and secure (your information is protected from
- spoofing and snooping). 
+Description: input method for Japanese - backend, dictionary and utility
+ Anthy is a Japanese input method working on X11 and Emacs. It converts
+ hiragana text to mixed kana and kanji. It is implemented as a library
+ and stores users' private information in their own home directory.
+ Thus, Anthy is simple and secure (information is protected from
+ spoofing and snooping).
 
 Package: anthy-el
 Architecture: all
 Depends: anthy, emacs21 | emacsen
-Description: A Japanese input method (elisp fronted)
- Anthy is a Japanese input method working on X11 and emacs. It converts
- Hiragana text to Kana Kanji mixed text. It is implemented as a library
- and stores user's private information into their own home directory. 
- Thus, Anthy is simple and secure (your information is protected from
+Description: input method for Japanese - elisp frontend
+ Anthy is a Japanese input method working on X11 and Emacs. It converts
+ hiragana text to mixed kana and kanji. It is implemented as a library
+ and stores users' private information in their own home directory.
+ Thus, Anthy is simple and secure (information is protected from
  spoofing and snooping).
  .
- This package includes Anthy frontend on Emacs and XEmacs.
+ This package provides an Anthy frontend for Emacs and XEmacs.
 
 Package: libanthy0
 Section: libs
 Architecture: any
 Depends: ${shlibs:Depends}
-Description: Anthy runtime library
- Anthy is a Japanese input method working on X11 and emacs. It converts
- Hiragana text to Kana Kanji mixed text. It is implemented as a library
- and stores user's private information into their own home directory. 
- Thus, Anthy is simple and secure (your information is protected from
+Description: input method for Japanese - runtime library
+ Anthy is a Japanese input method working on X11 and Emacs. It converts
+ hiragana text to mixed kana and kanji. It is implemented as a library
+ and stores users' private information in their own home directory.
+ Thus, Anthy is simple and secure (information is protected from
  spoofing and snooping).
  .
- This package includes Anthy shared libraries.
+ This package provides shared libraries for Anthy.
 
 Package: libanthy-dev
 Section: libdevel
 Architecture: any
 Depends: libanthy0 (= ${binary:Version})
-Description: Anthy static library, headers and documets for developers
- Anthy is a Japanese input method working on X11 and emacs. It converts
- Hiragana text to Kana Kanji mixed text. It is implemented as a library
- and stores user's private information into their own home directory. 
- Thus, Anthy is simple and secure (your information is protected from
+Description: Anthy
+Description: input method for Japanese - development files
+ Anthy is a Japanese input method working on X11 and Emacs. It converts
+ hiragana text to mixed kana and kanji. It is implemented as a library
+ and stores users' private information in their own home directory.
+ Thus, Anthy is simple and secure (information is protected from
  spoofing and snooping).
  .
- This Package includes Anthy header and static libraries.
+ This package provides the files necessary for compiling programs that
+ depend on Anthy.
Template: anthy/dictionaries
Type: multiselect
Choices: ${dictionaries}
Default: base.t, extra.t
_Description: Add-on dictionaries to use:
 The anthy package can use add-on dictionaries supplementary to the system
 dictionary. The following are currently available:
 .
  - base.t : Anthy-specific words which are compatible with cannadic;
  - extra.t: Anthy-specific words which are not compatible with cannadic;
  - 2ch.t  : Slang used on 2ch.net, the web's biggest discussion forum.
Source: anthy
Section: utils
Priority: optional
Maintainer: NOKUBI Takatsugu <knok@daionet.gr.jp>
Build-Depends: debhelper (>> 5.0.0), autotools-dev, dpatch (>= 1.11), debconf (>= 0.5), po-debconf, automake1.9
Standards-Version: 3.7.2.2

Package: anthy
Architecture: any
Replaces: anthy-cannadic, anthy-cannadic-2ch
Depends: ${shlibs:Depends}, ${misc:Depends}
Conflicts: anthy-cannadic, anthy-cannadic-2ch
Description: input method for Japanese - backend, dictionary and utility
 Anthy is a Japanese input method working on X11 and Emacs. It converts
 hiragana text to mixed kana and kanji. It is implemented as a library
 and stores users' private information in their own home directory.
 Thus, Anthy is simple and secure (information is protected from
 spoofing and snooping).

Package: anthy-el
Architecture: all
Depends: anthy, emacs21 | emacsen
Description: input method for Japanese - elisp frontend
 Anthy is a Japanese input method working on X11 and Emacs. It converts
 hiragana text to mixed kana and kanji. It is implemented as a library
 and stores users' private information in their own home directory.
 Thus, Anthy is simple and secure (information is protected from
 spoofing and snooping).
 .
 This package provides an Anthy frontend for Emacs and XEmacs.

Package: libanthy0
Section: libs
Architecture: any
Depends: ${shlibs:Depends}
Description: input method for Japanese - runtime library
 Anthy is a Japanese input method working on X11 and Emacs. It converts
 hiragana text to mixed kana and kanji. It is implemented as a library
 and stores users' private information in their own home directory.
 Thus, Anthy is simple and secure (information is protected from
 spoofing and snooping).
 .
 This package provides shared libraries for Anthy.

Package: libanthy-dev
Section: libdevel
Architecture: any
Depends: libanthy0 (= ${binary:Version})
Description: Anthy
Description: input method for Japanese - development files
 Anthy is a Japanese input method working on X11 and Emacs. It converts
 hiragana text to mixed kana and kanji. It is implemented as a library
 and stores users' private information in their own home directory.
 Thus, Anthy is simple and secure (information is protected from
 spoofing and snooping).
 .
 This package provides the files necessary for compiling programs that
 depend on Anthy.

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