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Please find, for review, the debconf templates and packages descriptions for the uswsusp source package.

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Template: uswsusp/resume_device
Type: select
Choices: ${list}
_Description: Swap space to resume from:
 To be able to suspend the system, uswsusp needs a swap partition or file
 to write a system snapshot to. Please choose the device to use, from the
 list of suitable swap spaces, sorted by size (largest first).


Template: uswsusp/resume_offset
Type: string
Description: Offset of swap file's header:
 When using a swap file for storing the snapshot during suspend, the
 location of the swap file's header must be specified. This will be
 stored in <PAGE_SIZE> units, as the offset from the beginning of the
 partition that contains the swap file.


Template: uswsusp/no_swap
Type: error
_Description: No suitable swap space for software suspend
 To be able to suspend the system, uswsusp needs a swap partition or file to
 write a system snapshot to. No such space seems to be available for this.
 .
 You should create such space, preferably twice the size of the system's
 physical RAM.
 .
 Then, run 'dpkg-reconfigure uswsusp' or setup the configuration file
 manually.


Template: uswsusp/no_snapshot
Type: error
_Description: No userspace software suspend support in the kernel
 The current kernel doesn't support userspace software suspend. Please
 recompile the kernel with the 'CONFIG_SOFTWARE_SUSPEND=y' option.


Template: uswsusp/continue_without_swap
Type: boolean
Default: true
_Description: Continue without a valid swap space?
 The swap file or partition that was found in uswsusp's configuration
 file is not active.
 .
 In most cases this means userspace software suspend will
 not work as expected. You should then choose another
 swap space.
 .
 However, in some rare cases, this configuration may be intentional.


Template: uswsusp/snapshot_device
Type: string
_Description: The device node through which uswsusp can talk to the kernel:
 If you leave this empty, you will get the hardcoded default, /dev/snapshot.
 This should be OK in almost all cases, don't change this unless you have a
 good reason to do so.


Template: uswsusp/image_size
Type: string
_Description: Preferred maximum image size:
 Please specify the preferred maximum image size (in bytes) for the
 system's snapshot.
 .
 This limit is not strict; the uswsusp tool will do its best to limit
 the image size as specified by this parameter. However, if suspend
 needs a bigger image, that size will be exceeded.
 .
 Using 0 for that parameter will enforce the use of the smallest
 possible snapshot image. An empty value will use the hard coded
 default, which is 500MB. The default value is 45% of the system's
 memory: this is not the maximal size, but some additional free memory
 speeds up the suspend and resume process.


Template: uswsusp/suspend_loglevel
Type: string
_Description: Log level for software suspend:
 Please specify the kernel console log level which the s2disk/s2both
 and resume utilities will use to report the suspend and resume
 progress. On a stock kernel, messages with levels higher than 7 are
 usually not shown.


Template: uswsusp/max_loglevel
Type: string
_Description: Maximal log level:
 Please specify the kernel console log level which the resume utility will use
 in case the resume fails.


Template: uswsusp/compute_checksum
Type: boolean
Default: false
_Description: Perform checksum on image?
 Performing a check sum using the MD5 algorithm to verify the image
 integrity is slightly safer, but also takes more time.


Template: uswsusp/compress
Type: boolean
Default: true
_Description: Compress image?
 Compressing the image with LZF compression algorithm will result in a
 smaller image, which makes it possible to suspend with a smaller swap
 partition. Generally it will also make reading and writing the image faster
 because there is less to read and write.


Template: uswsusp/early_writeout
Type: boolean
Default: true
_Description: Perform early write out?
 The resume device synchronization can start early in the process of writing
 the image to it. This has been reported to speed up suspend on some
 systems and eliminate the 'fast progress meter and long fsync wait' effect.


Template: uswsusp/splash
Type: boolean
Default: true
_Description: Show splash screen?
 Instead of informative output, a splash screen with progress bar can
 be shown during the suspend and resume process. This requires the splashy
 package to be installed.


Template: uswsusp/encrypt
Type: boolean
Default: false
_Description: Encrypt snapshot?
 For increased security, it is possible to encrypt the snapshot
 that is written to disk during suspend. On resume (and suspend if you don't
 use an RSA key), you will be prompted for a passphrase. Encryption
 adds a significant time to the suspend and resume processes.


Template: uswsusp/RSA_key_file
Type: string
Default: /etc/uswsusp.key
_Description: Path to RSA key file:
 To avoid being prompted for a passphrase during each suspend,
 an RSA key can be used to encrypt the image.
 .
 Please specify the path to that file. If you don't want to use an RSA
 key, leave this field empty.


Template: uswsusp/create_RSA_key
Type: boolean
Default: false
_Description: Create an RSA key?
 The key necessary for using the RSA encryption scheme can be generated now.
 You will be prompted for a passphrase.

Template: uswsusp/RSA_key_bits
Type: string
Default: 1024
_Description: RSA key size:
 Please specify the size of the RSA key (number of bits between 1024
 and 4096). A bigger key adds increases the encryption strength but slows
 down the encryption process.


Template: uswsusp/RSA_passphrase
Type: password
_Description: RSA passphrase:
 Please choose the passphrase to use on every resume to decrypt the
 image.


Template: uswsusp/RSA_passphrase_v
Type: password
_Description: RSA passphrase confirmation:


Template: uswsusp/shutdown_method
Type: select
__Choices: reboot, platform, poweroff
Default: platform
Description: Shutdown method:
 If this parameter is set to 'reboot', the s2disk utility will
 reboot the machine rather than powering down. This is usually useful
 for testing purposes.
--- ../uswsusp.old/debian/uswsusp.templates	2007-09-16 22:51:22.504558107 +0200
+++ debian/uswsusp.templates	2007-09-23 10:01:11.315319966 +0200
@@ -1,35 +1,39 @@
 Template: uswsusp/resume_device
 Type: select
 Choices: ${list}
-_Description: The swap space to resume from:
- To be able to suspend your system, uswsusp needs a swap partition or file
- to write a snapshot of your system to. Provided is a list of suitable swap
- spaces, sorted by size, the largest first.
+_Description: Swap space to resume from:
+ To be able to suspend the system, uswsusp needs a swap partition or file
+ to write a system snapshot to. Please choose the device to use, from the
+ list of suitable swap spaces, sorted by size (largest first).
 
 
 Template: uswsusp/resume_offset
 Type: string
 Description: Offset of swap file's header:
- When using a swap file for storing the snapshot during suspend, you need to
- specify where the swap file's header is located. This parameter specifies this
- location, in <PAGE_SIZE> units, as the offset from the beginning of the
+ When using a swap file for storing the snapshot during suspend, the
+ location of the swap file's header must be specified. This will be
+ stored in <PAGE_SIZE> units, as the offset from the beginning of the
  partition that contains the swap file.
 
 
 Template: uswsusp/no_swap
 Type: error
-_Description: No swap space found; userspace software suspend will not work
- To be able to suspend your system, uswsusp needs a swap partition or file to
- write a snapshot of your system to. Your system doesn't seem to have such a
- space. Please make one, preferably with twice the size of your physical ram.
- Then run dpkg-reconfigure or setup the configuration file yourself.
+_Description: No suitable swap space for software suspend
+ To be able to suspend the system, uswsusp needs a swap partition or file to
+ write a system snapshot to. No such space seems to be available for this.
+ .
+ You should create such space, preferably twice the size of the system's
+ physical RAM.
+ .
+ Then, run 'dpkg-reconfigure uswsusp' or setup the configuration file
+ manually.
 
 
 Template: uswsusp/no_snapshot
-Type: note
-_Description: Your kernel doesn't support userspace software suspend
- Your kernel doesn't support userspace software suspend. Please reconfigure
- your kernel to include CONFIG_SOFTWARE_SUSPEND=y and recompile.
+Type: error
+_Description: No userspace software suspend support in the kernel
+ The current kernel doesn't support userspace software suspend. Please
+ recompile the kernel with the 'CONFIG_SOFTWARE_SUSPEND=y' option.
 
 
 Template: uswsusp/continue_without_swap
@@ -37,9 +41,13 @@
 Default: true
 _Description: Continue without a valid swap space?
  The swap file or partition that was found in uswsusp's configuration
- file is not active. In most cases this means userspace software suspend will
- not work for you and you will need to choose (or let uswsusp choose) another
- swap space. In some corner cases however, this can be what you want.
+ file is not active.
+ .
+ In most cases this means userspace software suspend will
+ not work as expected. You should then choose another
+ swap space.
+ .
+ However, in some rare cases, this configuration may be intentional.
 
 
 Template: uswsusp/snapshot_device
@@ -53,28 +61,33 @@
 Template: uswsusp/image_size
 Type: string
 _Description: Preferred maximum image size:
- You can specify the preferred maximum image size (in bytes). This is not a hard
- bound; the uswsusp tool will do its best to limit the image size as specified
- by this parameter, but if that's not possible, it will suspend the system
- anyway with a bigger image. If this value is set to 0, the snapshot image will
- be as small as possible. If you leave it empty you get the hard coded default,
- which is 500MB. The default value you are presented with is 45% of the memory
- available on your system, this is not the maximal size, but some additional
- free memory speeds up the suspend and resume process.
+ Please specify the preferred maximum image size (in bytes) for the
+ system's snapshot.
+ .
+ This limit is not strict; the uswsusp tool will do its best to limit
+ the image size as specified by this parameter. However, if suspend
+ needs a bigger image, that size will be exceeded.
+ .
+ Using 0 for that parameter will enforce the use of the smallest
+ possible snapshot image. An empty value will use the hard coded
+ default, which is 500MB. The default value is 45% of the system's
+ memory: this is not the maximal size, but some additional free memory
+ speeds up the suspend and resume process.
 
 
 Template: uswsusp/suspend_loglevel
 Type: string
-_Description: Log level:
- You can specify the kernel console loglevel which the s2disk/s2both and resume
- utilities will use to report progress. On a stock kernel, messages with
- level higher then 7 are usually not shown.
+_Description: Log level for software suspend:
+ Please specify the kernel console log level which the s2disk/s2both
+ and resume utilities will use to report the suspend and resume
+ progress. On a stock kernel, messages with levels higher than 7 are
+ usually not shown.
 
 
 Template: uswsusp/max_loglevel
 Type: string
 _Description: Maximal log level:
- You can specify the kernel console loglevel which the resume utility will use
+ Please specify the kernel console log level which the resume utility will use
  in case the resume fails.
 
 
@@ -83,7 +96,7 @@
 Default: false
 _Description: Perform checksum on image?
  Performing a check sum using the MD5 algorithm to verify the image
- integrity is slightly safer, but also takes slightly more time.
+ integrity is slightly safer, but also takes more time.
 
 
 Template: uswsusp/compress
@@ -100,75 +113,74 @@
 Type: boolean
 Default: true
 _Description: Perform early write out?
- uswsusp can start syncing the resume device early in the process of writing
- the image to it. This has been reported to speed up the suspend on some
- boxes and eliminate the "fast progress meter and long fsync wait" effect.
+ The resume device synchronization can start early in the process of writing
+ the image to it. This has been reported to speed up suspend on some
+ systems and eliminate the 'fast progress meter and long fsync wait' effect.
 
 
 Template: uswsusp/splash
 Type: boolean
 Default: true
 _Description: Show splash screen?
- Instead of informative output you can enjoy a nice splash screen with progress
- bar during the suspend and resume process. For this to work you will need to
- have the splashy package installed.
+ Instead of informative output, a splash screen with progress bar can
+ be shown during the suspend and resume process. This requires the splashy
+ package to be installed.
 
 
 Template: uswsusp/encrypt
 Type: boolean
 Default: false
 _Description: Encrypt snapshot?
- For added security it is possible to encrypt the snapshot of your system
+ For increased security, it is possible to encrypt the snapshot
  that is written to disk during suspend. On resume (and suspend if you don't
- you use an RSA key) you will be asked to provide a passphrase. With encryption
- the suspend and resume process will take significantly more time.
+ use an RSA key), you will be prompted for a passphrase. Encryption
+ adds a significant time to the suspend and resume processes.
 
 
 Template: uswsusp/RSA_key_file
 Type: string
 Default: /etc/uswsusp.key
 _Description: Path to RSA key file:
- To avoid being prompted for a passphrase during suspend every time, one can
- supply an RSA key which will be used to encrypt the image. This option takes
- the path to that file. The default path will be good for most people. If
- you don't want to use an RSA key, leave this empty.
+ To avoid being prompted for a passphrase during each suspend,
+ an RSA key can be used to encrypt the image.
+ .
+ Please specify the path to that file. If you don't want to use an RSA
+ key, leave this field empty.
 
 
 Template: uswsusp/create_RSA_key
 Type: boolean
 Default: false
-_Description: Create RSA key?
- The key necessary for using the RSA encryption scheme can be generated for you.
+_Description: Create an RSA key?
+ The key necessary for using the RSA encryption scheme can be generated now.
  You will be prompted for a passphrase.
 
 Template: uswsusp/RSA_key_bits
 Type: string
 Default: 1024
-_Description: RSA key bits:
- The number of bits (between 1024 and 4096 inclusive) the RSA key will have.
- The more bits, the more secure, but also slower operation.
+_Description: RSA key size:
+ Please specify the size of the RSA key (number of bits between 1024
+ and 4096). A bigger key adds increases the encryption strength but slows
+ down the encryption process.
 
 
 Template: uswsusp/RSA_passphrase
 Type: password
 _Description: RSA passphrase:
- This is the passphrase you will have to type on every resume to decrypt the
+ Please choose the passphrase to use on every resume to decrypt the
  image.
 
 
 Template: uswsusp/RSA_passphrase_v
 Type: password
-_Description: RSA passphrase (again):
- To verify you know what you just typed, type the passphrase again.
+_Description: RSA passphrase confirmation:
 
 
 Template: uswsusp/shutdown_method
 Type: select
-Choices: reboot, platform, poweroff
+__Choices: reboot, platform, poweroff
 Default: platform
 Description: Shutdown method:
- If the "shutdown method" parameter is set to "reboot", the s2disk utility will
- reboot the machine rather than powering down. This is useful when testing
- repeated benchmarks, such as when checking whether "early writeout" produces a
- speedup or not for your combination of hardware, image size, and s2disk
- parameters.
+ If this parameter is set to 'reboot', the s2disk utility will
+ reboot the machine rather than powering down. This is usually useful
+ for testing purposes.
--- ../uswsusp.old/debian/control	2007-09-16 22:51:22.504558107 +0200
+++ debian/control	2007-09-23 10:04:30.826689471 +0200
@@ -11,17 +11,17 @@
 Recommends: initramfs-tools (>= 0.74), mount (>= 2.12r-17)
 Suggests: splashy (>= 0.3)
 Description: tools to use userspace software suspend provided by Linux
- uswsusp (also known as µswsusp or simply suspend) contains the programs to 
+ This package contains the programs to 
  use the userspace software suspend facility available in Linux kernel 
- 2.6.17-rc1 and higher. It enables you to save the state of the whole system 
- to disk and power off your system. After restarting your system it will be 
- put back in the exact system state you left it (this is sometimes called 
+ 2.6.17-rc1 and higher. It allows saving the state of the whole system 
+ to disk and powering off the system. When restarting, the system will be 
+ put back in the state it was left (this is sometimes called 
  hibernation). 
  .
- It also includes a program to suspend-to-ram after the state is saved to disk.
- In the suspend-to-ram state the system still uses power, but is faster in
- resuming. In case the battery depletes the state is still on disk and
- resume can continue without data loss.
+ It also includes a program to suspend the system to RAM after the
+ state is saved to disk. In that state, the system still uses power,
+ but resuming is faster. In case the battery depletes, the state is
+ resumed from disk without data loss.
  .
  Optional features include encrypting the system snapshot and a themeable
  splash screen during the suspend and resume processes.
Source: uswsusp
Section: admin
Priority: optional
Maintainer: Tim Dijkstra <tim@famdijkstra.org>
Build-Depends: debhelper (>= 5), pciutils-dev, docbook2x, docbook-xml, xsltproc, po-debconf, libgcrypt11-dev, zlib1g-dev, libsplashy1-dev, libx86-dev [amd64 i386]
Standards-Version: 3.7.2

Package: uswsusp
Architecture: i386 amd64 powerpc
Depends: ${shlibs:Depends}, ${misc:Depends}
Recommends: initramfs-tools (>= 0.74), mount (>= 2.12r-17)
Suggests: splashy (>= 0.3)
Description: tools to use userspace software suspend provided by Linux
 This package contains the programs to 
 use the userspace software suspend facility available in Linux kernel 
 2.6.17-rc1 and higher. It allows saving the state of the whole system 
 to disk and powering off the system. When restarting, the system will be 
 put back in the state it was left (this is sometimes called 
 hibernation). 
 .
 It also includes a program to suspend the system to RAM after the
 state is saved to disk. In that state, the system still uses power,
 but resuming is faster. In case the battery depletes, the state is
 resumed from disk without data loss.
 .
 Optional features include encrypting the system snapshot and a themeable
 splash screen during the suspend and resume processes.
 .
 To use this package you need a Linux kernel version 2.6.17-rc1 or newer
 configured to use an initramfs. Hooks and scripts to integrate with 
 initramfs-tools are provided.
 .
  Homepage: http://suspend.sourceforge.net/

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