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Re: Debconf rewrite project: review the call-update.txt mail



On Sat, Mar 17, 2007 at 09:38:52AM +0100, Christian Perrier wrote:

> Please comment and, as usual, correct my broken English.

Patch attached.

Dominic.

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Dominic Hargreaves | http://www.larted.org.uk/~dom/
PGP key 5178E2A5 from the.earth.li (keyserver,web,email)
--- call-updates.txt.old	2007-03-17 11:24:26.000000000 +0000
+++ call-updates.txt	2007-03-17 11:24:19.000000000 +0000
@@ -12,13 +12,12 @@
 
 Hi,
 
-The debian-l10n-english team reviewed the debconf templates for
-<package>.
+The debian-l10n-english team has reviewed the debconf templates for
+<package>. This process has resulted in changes that may make your
+existing translation incomplete.
 
-This resulted in rewrites that make your existing translation incomplete.
-
-A round of translation updates is now launched to bring all
-translations back to completeness.
+A round of translation updates is being launched to synchronize all
+translations.
 
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