Re: [RFR2] templates://dtc/dtc.templates
There seemed to be a missing adjective in dtc/conf_upgrade_pear
which I guessed. I repeat other OT comments about the poor default
choice of DNSBLs.
--- dtc.templates 2007-03-11 14:46:38.000000000 +0000
+++ dtc.templates.mod 2007-03-11 15:01:50.000000000 +0000
@@ -9,7 +9,7 @@
Default: root
_Description: MySQL administrator:
Please enter the login name of a MySQL user with administrative
- privileges. DTC will use it to to grant privileges for the tables to
+ privileges. DTC will use it to grant privileges for the tables to
its users.
Template: dtc/conf_mysqlpass
@@ -21,13 +21,14 @@
Type: string
Default: dtc
_Description: DTC database name:
- All DTC hosting information is stored in a database.
+ Please enter the name of the database to use for storing all
+ DTC hosting information.
Template: dtc/conf_mysql_change_root
Type: boolean
Default: false
_Description: Change MySQL root password?
- By default, the mysql-server package does not enforce a password for
+ By default, the mysql-server package does not require a password for
the MySQL root user. This can be changed during the configuration of
the DTC package.
@@ -36,7 +37,7 @@
Default: example.com
_Description: Domain name:
Please enter the first domain which you want DTC to
- administrate. This domain name will be used to install the root
+ manage. This domain name will be used to install the root
admin and customer web control panel of DTC (under one of this domain's
subdomains).
@@ -62,8 +63,8 @@
Please enter the directory to be used by DTC to store files for
all hosted domains.
.
- The default Apache installation defines /var/www as document
- root. This should be removed from the httpd.conf file manually when
+ The default Apache installation defines /var/www as the document
+ root. This should be removed from the httpd.conf file manually if
another directory is chosen as DTC's hosting area.
Template: dtc/conf_chroot_path
@@ -78,7 +79,7 @@
Default: dtc
_Description: Main domain admin name:
Each DTC domain must have an administrator. Please enter the login
- name of the administator for the domain name holding the control
+ name of the administator for the domain name containing the control
panel installation.
Template: dtc/conf_admpass
@@ -92,8 +93,8 @@
Type: select
Choices: postfix, qmail
_Description: Mail Transfer Agent (MTA) type:
- Please select the type of the MTA that will be used with DTC. It
- should be already installed on the system. If no such MTA is actually
+ Please select the type of MTA that will be used with DTC. It
+ should be installed on the system already. If no such MTA is currently
installed, please complete the setup of DTC, install a MTA
package, then run "dpkg-reconfigure dtc".
@@ -102,13 +103,13 @@
Default: false
_Description: Use Cyrus mail system?
Please choose this option if you are using Cyrus for mail
- delivery, imap and MTA. This option is only compatible with Postfix.
+ delivery, IMAP and MTA. This option is only compatible with Postfix.
Template: dtc/conf_apache_version
Type: select
Choices: 2, 1
_Description: Apache version to configure:
- DTC supports both Apache and Apache2. Please enter which version
+ DTC supports both Apache and Apache2. Please enter the version which
- should be used by DTC.
+ DTC should use.
Template: dtc/conf_use_nated_vhosts
@@ -116,12 +117,12 @@
Default: false
_Description: Use "NATed" vhosts?
DTC can generate configuration files for Apache to have it use an IP
- address of your server. In case the server is firewalled with NAT and
- port redirections of public IP(s) address(es), you can request for
- the generation of "NATed" vhosts.
+ address of your server. If the server is firewalled with NAT and
+ port redirections of public IP(s) address(es), you can request
+ generation of "NATed" vhosts.
.
Do not choose this option if the server is directly connected to the
- Internet, except when using dynamic IP addresses. In such case, NAT
+ Internet, except when using dynamic IP addresses. In such cases, NAT
and port forwarding are mandatory for DTC.
Template: dtc/conf_nated_vhosts_ip
@@ -135,14 +136,14 @@
Type: boolean
Default: false
_Description: Generate an OpenSSL certificate for DTC?
- If you choose this option, DTC will generate a self signed OpenSSL
+ If you choose this option, DTC will generate a self-signed OpenSSL
certificate and will use SSL to browse the panel. SSL will also be
activated and the generated Apache configuration will activate HTTPS
URLs for the control panel.
.
- This certificate can later be changed for a root CA certificate.
+ This certificate can be changed for a root CA certificate later.
.
- Previously generated certificates will never be overwritten. To
+ Previously-generated certificates will never be overwritten. To
regenerate the certificate, you need to remove all the files in
/usr/share/dtc/etc/ssl.
@@ -167,12 +168,12 @@
Template: dtc/conf_cert_organization
Type: string
Default: GPLHost
-_Description: Organization name for the DTC SSL certificate:
+_Description: Organisation name for the DTC SSL certificate:
Template: dtc/conf_cert_unit
Type: string
Default: no-unit
-_Description: Organization unit for the DTC SSL:
+_Description: Organisation unit for the DTC SSL:
Template: dtc/conf_cert_email
Type: string
@@ -189,7 +190,7 @@
DTC can check the PEAR installation during its own installation
process. This requires your server to be connected to the network. If
you can't do so here, please check whether the Crypt_CBC and
- Auth_SASL PEAR modules are. The relevant files are located in
+ Auth_SASL PEAR modules are installed. The relevant files are located in
/usr/share/php.
Template: dtc/conf_dnsbl_list
@@ -212,7 +213,7 @@
DTC installations can be reported to GPLHost web site. The only
collected data are the operating system name (Debian) and the IP
address (used as a unique identifier only). An Internet connection
- and the wget binary are mandatory for statistics collection..
+ and the wget binary are required for statistics collection.
Template: dtc/conf_omit_dev_mknod
Type: boolean
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