(very quick review in the middle of my holidays) Quoting Vincent Bernat (bernat@luffy.cx): > > Hi ! > > I have packaged sshproxy (a proxy for SSH ;-) ). Here is the current > description: > > Package: sshproxy > Description: ssh gateway to apply ACLs on ssh connections s/ssh/SSH > sshproxy is a pure python implementation of an ssh proxy. There is no much value added in explaining that it is written in Python. > It allows users to connect to remote sites without having to remember > the password or key of the remote sites. To avoid beginning the sentence with the program name and thus having a leading lowercase letter I suggest: An SSH proxy allows users to.... There's a repetition of "remote sites" > > Package: sshproxy-backend-mysql > Description: MySQL backend for sshproxy > sshproxy is a pure python implementation of an ssh proxy. > It allows users to connect to remote sites without having to remember > the password or key of the remote sites. > . > This package provides mysql backend. This package provides the MySQL backend. > > Package: sshproxy-client > Description: wrappers around ssh for sshproxy > sshproxy is a pure python implementation of an ssh proxy. > It allows users to connect to remote sites without having to remember > the password or key of the remote sites. > . > This package provides clients to connect to sshproxy. > > Package: sshproxy-extra-plugins > Description: extra plugins for sshproxy > sshproxy is a pure python implementation of an ssh proxy. > It allows users to connect to remote sites without having to remember > the password or key of the remote sites. > . > This package provides extra plugins : console-extra, acl-funcs, > logusers, alternate-login, remote-logging and telnetclient Missing final dot.
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