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Re: [Pkg-ltsp-devel] please review LTSP debconf templates



vagrant@freegeek.org wrote:
> attached are the two relevent templates files.

Now I notice a couple more things that I should have fixed the last
time it passed this way.

> Template: ltsp-client-builder/dhcp-interface
> Type: select
> Choices: ${choices}
> _Description: Interface for the thin client network:
>  Please choose, among the multiple spare interfaces this system has, which
>  one should be used for the thin client.

Make that:
   Please choose which of this system's multiple spare interfaces should be
   used for the thin client.

> Template: ltsp-client/abort-installation
> Type: error
> _Description: Installation aborted
>  The ltsp-client package cannot be installed in a regular
>  machine. This package provides the basic structure for a LTSP
>  terminal.
>  . 
>  Please read the package description to understand what it means.

That's *an* ell-ess-tee-pee terminal.  But while I'm rephrasing
things, how about:

   The ltsp-client package provides the basic structure for an LTSP
   terminal. It cannot be installed on a regular machine.

Patch attached.
-- 
JBR
Ankh kak! (Ancient Egyptian blessing)
--- ../ltsp.old/ltsp-client-builder.templates	2007-10-13 10:49:49.000000000 +0100
+++ ltsp-client-builder.templates	2007-10-13 10:58:45.000000000 +0100
@@ -21,11 +21,11 @@
 
 Template: ltsp-client-builder/progress
 Type: text
-_Description: Building thin client system ...
+_Description: Building thin client system...
 
 Template: ltsp-client-builder/compress
 Type: text
-_Description: Compressing thin client image ...
+_Description: Compressing thin client image...
 
 Template: ltsp-client-builder/build-client-opts
 Type: string
@@ -45,5 +45,5 @@
 Type: select
 Choices: ${choices}
 _Description: Interface for the thin client network:
- Please choose, among the multiple spare interfaces this system has, which
- one should be used for the thin client.
+ Please choose which of this system's multiple spare interfaces should be
+ used for the thin client.
--- ../ltsp.old/ltsp-client-core.templates	2007-10-13 10:49:50.000000000 +0100
+++ ltsp-client-core.templates	2007-10-13 10:56:10.000000000 +0100
@@ -10,8 +10,5 @@
 Template: ltsp-client/abort-installation
 Type: error
 _Description: Installation aborted
- The ltsp-client package cannot be installed in a regular
- machine. This package provides the basic structure for a LTSP
- terminal.
- . 
- Please read the package description to understand what it means.
+ The ltsp-client package provides the basic structure for an LTSP
+ terminal. It cannot be installed on a regular machine.

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