Re: [RFR] templates://hobbit/{hobbit-client.templates}
Christian Perrier wrote:
> + Please enter the network address used to access the Hobbit
> + server(s). If you use multiple servers, use a space-separated list of
> + addresses.
> + .
> + Using host names instead of IP addresses is discouraged in case the
> + network experiences DNS failures.
[...]
> There's a repetition of "use" which could be improved, imho...but I
> prefer this over "if you have" (the sysadmin doesn't have addresses,
> the machine does...).
How about "If there are multiple servers", avoiding the pronoun?
> Package: hobbit
[...]
> + large-scale networks. It will also work just fine on a small network with
> just a few nodes. It is low-overhead and high-performance, with an easy to use
> web front-end.
[...]
> Maybe we could replace "work just fine" which is day-to-day language
> by something like ""work as well"
Especially since there's another "just" in the same sentence. How
about "It will work equally well on a small network"?
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JBR
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