Re: [RFR] templates://mod-mono/{libapache2-mod-mono.templates}
James Westby wrote:
> On (03/07/07 06:40), Christian Perrier wrote:
>> Please find, for review, the debconf templates of mod-mono.
>
> I have no comments on this package.
Oops, I must have misfiled the RFR for this one.
>> Mono ASP.NET backends:
>> - mod-mono-server : implements ASP.NET 1.1 features;
>> - mod-mono-server2': implements ASP.NET 2.0 features.
Surplus apostrophe: ^
>> Package: libapache2-mod-mono
...
>> Description: run ASP.NET pages on UNIX with Apache 2 and Mono
Linux isn't UNIX; you don't "run" pages; and that's nothing like a
DevRef-compliant appositional phrase (in fact it's a sentence). I'd
have thought it should be something like:
Description: Apache module for running ASP.NET apps via Mono
>> The mod_mono module for Apache allows using ASP.NET web
>> applications, with the Mono .NET implementation.
If that's "with" in the sense of "by means of" (rather than "along
with"), I'd recommend:
The mod_mono module for Apache allows ASP.NET web applications
to be run with the Mono .NET implementation.
--
JBR
Ankh kak! (Ancient Egyptian blessing)
--- ../mod-mono.old/debian/libapache2-mod-mono.templates 2007-07-11 00:48:43.000000000 +0100
+++ debian/libapache2-mod-mono.templates 2007-07-11 00:49:32.000000000 +0100
@@ -1,7 +1,8 @@
Template: libapache2-mod-mono/mono-server
Type: select
Choices: mod-mono-server, mod-mono-server2
-_Description: Use mono-server:
- This module, libapache2-mod-mono, can be used with one of two different
- Mono ASP.NET backends. `mod-mono-server' implements ASP.NET 1.1 while
- `mod-mono-server2' implementes ASP.NET 2.0 features.
+_Description: Mono server to use:
+ The libapache2-mod-mono module can be used with one of two different
+ Mono ASP.NET backends:
+ - mod-mono-server : implements ASP.NET 1.1 features;
+ - mod-mono-server2: implements ASP.NET 2.0 features.
--- ../mod-mono.old/debian/control 2007-07-11 00:48:44.000000000 +0100
+++ debian/control 2007-07-11 00:51:19.000000000 +0100
@@ -10,8 +10,8 @@
Architecture: any
Section: web
Depends: ${shlibs:Depends}, debconf (>= 1.2.0), apache2 (>= 2.2), apache2.2-common, mono-jit (>= 1.0.1), mono-apache-server (>= ${current-version}) | mono-apache-server2 (>= ${current-version}), mono-apache-server (<< ${next-version}) | mono-apache-server2 (<< ${next-version})
-Description: Run ASP.NET Pages on UNIX with Apache 2 and Mono
- mod_mono is a module for Apache that enables you to write ASP.NET web
- applications, using the Mono .NET implementation.
+Description: Apache module for running ASP.NET apps via Mono
+ The mod_mono module for Apache allows ASP.NET web applications to
+ be run with the Mono .NET implementation.
.
- This is the Apache 2.2 version.
+ This package provides the Apache 2.2 version of the module.
Template: libapache2-mod-mono/mono-server
Type: select
Choices: mod-mono-server, mod-mono-server2
_Description: Mono server to use:
The libapache2-mod-mono module can be used with one of two different
Mono ASP.NET backends:
- mod-mono-server : implements ASP.NET 1.1 features;
- mod-mono-server2: implements ASP.NET 2.0 features.
Source: mod-mono
Section: web
Priority: optional
Maintainer: Debian Mono Group <pkg-mono-group@lists.alioth.debian.org>
Uploaders: Eduard Bloch <blade@debian.org>, Pablo Fischer <pablo@pablo.com.mx>, Dylan R. E. Moonfire <debian@mfgames.com>
Build-Depends: debhelper (>= 4.1.16), apache2-dev (>= 2.2) | apache2-threaded-dev (>= 2.2), libmono-dev, po-debconf
Standards-Version: 3.7.2
Package: libapache2-mod-mono
Architecture: any
Section: web
Depends: ${shlibs:Depends}, debconf (>= 1.2.0), apache2 (>= 2.2), apache2.2-common, mono-jit (>= 1.0.1), mono-apache-server (>= ${current-version}) | mono-apache-server2 (>= ${current-version}), mono-apache-server (<< ${next-version}) | mono-apache-server2 (<< ${next-version})
Description: Apache module for running ASP.NET apps via Mono
The mod_mono module for Apache allows ASP.NET web applications to
be run with the Mono .NET implementation.
.
This package provides the Apache 2.2 version of the module.
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