Re: [RFR] templates://ltsp/{ltsp-client-builder.templates,ltsp-client-core.tem plates}

[Justin B Rye <jbr@edlug.org.uk>]

Christian Perrier wrote:
> Your review should be sent as an answer to this mail.

>  Template: ltsp-client/abort-installation
...
> - ltsp-client cannot be installed in a regular machine. This package provides 
> - the basic structure for a LTSP terminal.
> + The ltsp-client package cannot be installed in a regular
> + machine. This package provides the basic structure for a LTSP
> + terminal.
> 
> Avoid a leading lowercase letter

My only remaining concern is this expression "regular machine",
which makes me think of deterministic finite state automata and so
on.  Personally I'd say "normal machine".  However, I expect en_US
speakers would find this use of "regular" perfectly, er, normal, so
it probably isn't worth changing.
-- 
JBR
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