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Re: [LCFC] templates://myphpmoney/{templates}



Christian Perrier wrote:
> This is the last call for comments for the review of debconf
> templates for myphpmoney.

On looking at this again I've noticed a couple of things in the
templates that I should have spotted the first time round.

> Template: myphpmoney/mysql_user
...
> _Description: MySQL database login name:
>  Please enter the MySQL login name to use for accessing MyPhpMoney's
>  database.

The "for accessing" is subtly awkward.  How about:

   Please enter the name of the MySQL account to be used for the MyPhpMoney
   database.

> Template: myphpmoney/database_pass
...
> _Description: MySQL database password:
>  Please enter the password for the MySQL login name that will be used to
>  access MyPhpMoney's database. Leave this blank for not using a password.

Changing this mostly to keep it in line with the above:

   Please enter the password of the MySQL account to be used for the
   MyPhpMoney database. Leave this blank to use no password.

(A "null password" rather than a "locked account", right?)

> Template: myphpmoney/dbcreateerror
...
> _Description: MyPhpMoney database creation failure
>  The MyPhpMoney installation program failed to properly set up a database.
>  Please make sure all of parameters you supplied are correct and that
                    (missing article)
>  the your database server software is running.
(excess article)

> Template: myphpmoney/postrm_remove_database
...
> _Description: Remove database after purging the myphpmoney package?
>  Please choose whether MyPhPMoney's database should be removed when
                           Php
-- 
JBR
Ankh kak! (Ancient Egyptian blessing)
--- ../myphpmoney.old/debian/templates	2007-06-15 11:50:47.000000000 +0100
+++ debian/templates	2007-07-02 02:26:01.000000000 +0100
@@ -2,83 +2,73 @@
 Type: boolean
 Default: false
 _Description: Do you want to configure MyPhpMoney now?
- MyPhpMoney needs to be configured before its use, i.e. the MySQL database
- should be created and the Apache Web Server should be configured.
+ MyPhpMoney needs to be configured before its use: the MySQL database
+ should be created and the Apache web server should be configured.
  .
- For that you will need the username and the password of your MySQL
- database administrator.
+ To achieve this, you will need to provide the login name and the
+ password of the MySQL database server administrator.
  .
  If you want to configure it later, you should run 'dpkg-reconfigure
  myphpmoney'.
 
-Template: myphpmoney/webservers
-Type: multiselect
-Choices: ${webservers}
-Default: apache, apache-ssl, apache-perl, apache2
-_Description: Please select which Web Server you want to use for MyPhpMoney
- MyPhpMoney currently only supports Apache type Web Servers.
-
 Template: myphpmoney/databasemgr_server
 Type: string
 Default: localhost
-_Description: What is the hostname where your database is running?
- If your database is on another machine besides the one that MyPhpMoney is
- running on then you need to change this value to the fully qualified
- domain name for that system.  If you wish to access it locally, simply
- use "localhost" here.
+_Description: Database server host name:
+ The database for MyPhpMoney may be hosted on a remote server.
+ .
+ Please enter the fully qualified domain name for that system.
+ .
+ If the database is hosted locally, please enter 'localhost'.
 
 Template: myphpmoney/database_name
 Type: string
 Default: myphpmoney
-_Description: What name do you want for your MyPhpMoney database?
- This is where all the MyPhpMoney data will be stored.
+_Description: MyPhpMoney database name:
+ Please enter the name of the database where MyPhpMoney data will be stored.
 
 Template: myphpmoney/mysql_user
 Type: string
 Default: myphpmoney
-_Description: What is your MySQL database username?
- What username will access the MySQL database for MyPhpMoney?  This user
- will be created if it doesn't already exist.  Note that your database
- manager must be configured to allow password authentication or MyPhpMoney
- will not work.
+_Description: MySQL database login name:
+ Please enter the name of the MySQL account to be used for the MyPhpMoney
+ database.
+ .
+ It will be created if it doesn't already exist.
+ .
+ Please note that the database server software must be configured to allow
+ password authentication.
 
 Template: myphpmoney/database_pass
 Type: password
-_Description: What is the password you wish to use for the database user?
- Enter a password for the database user (leave blank for no password). This
- is the password that will be used along with the database user name you
- have already supplied to connect to the database.
+_Description: MySQL database password:
+ Please enter the password of the MySQL account to be used for the
+ MyPhpMoney database. Leave this blank to use no password.
 
 Template: myphpmoney/mysql_dbadmin
 Type: string
 Default: root
-_Description: Enter the username of your MySQL database administrator.
- This is the database admin username used to create MyPhpMoney database and
- user.  For MySQL databases, this is usually "root".
+_Description: MySQL database server administrator:
+ Please enter the database server administrator's login name. MySQL 
+ database server software generally uses 'root'.
 
 Template: myphpmoney/dbadmpass
 Type: password
-_Description: What is your admin database password?
- Enter the password for your database admin user to access the database.
+_Description: MySQL database server administrator password:
+ Please enter the database server administrator's password.
 
 Template: myphpmoney/dbcreateerror
-Type: note
-_Description: Error: failed to set up MyPhpMoney database properly !
- MyPhpMoney installation program failed to set up a database properly for
- its needs.  Please make sure all of parameters you supplied are correct
- and that your database manager is running.  Install MyPhpMoney again to
- make it working.
-
-Template: myphpmoney/installed
-Type: note
-_Description: MyPhpMoney is now installed
- MyPhpMoney setup was successfully completed.  You can now test MyPhpMoney
- by using your favourite browser to visit ${site}.
+Type: error
+_Description: MyPhpMoney database creation failure
+ The MyPhpMoney installation program failed to properly set up a database.
+ Please make sure all of the parameters you supplied are correct and that
+ your database server software is running.
+ .
+ Please re-install MyPhpMoney to create the database.
 
 Template: myphpmoney/postrm_remove_database
 Type: boolean
 Default: false
-_Description: Remove database after "purging" the myphpmoney package?
- Should I remove the database when you purge the myphpmoney package with
- the "dpkg --purge myphpmoney" command (i.e.  remove everything including
- the configuration) later on? (default is not)
+_Description: Remove database after purging the myphpmoney package?
+ Please choose whether MyPhpMoney's database should be removed when
+ the myphpmoney package is purged.
--- ../myphpmoney.old/debian/control	2007-06-15 11:50:47.000000000 +0100
+++ debian/control	2007-07-02 02:01:09.000000000 +0100
@@ -9,17 +9,16 @@
 Architecture: all
 Depends: apache (>= 1.3.29.0.1-1) | apache-ssl (>= 1.3.29.0.1-1) | apache-perl (>= 1.3.29.0.1-1) | httpd, php4 (>= 4.0.3pl1) | php4-cgi (>= 4.0.3pl1) | libapache-mod-php4 | libapache2-mod-php4, php4-mysql, php4-gd, mysql-client, wwwconfig-common (>= 0.0.19), ttf-bitstream-vera, ${misc:Depends}
 Recommends: mysql-server-4.1 | mysql-server-5.0
-Description: Finance manager written in PHP
- MyPhpMoney is a finance manager written in PHP. It consists of 6 modules:
-   * Count book (to enter your operations and balance your accounts) ;
-   * Schedule of payments (to allow you to know the date due on your 
-     coming payments) ;
-   * Operation and Recipient (to see a summary of operations, with the 
-     origin and the destination of your money) ;
-   * Loan simulation
-   * Backup MySql 
-   * Options & Configuration.
+Description: finance manager
+ MyPhpMoney includes 6 modules:
+  - Accounting book (to enter operations and balance accounts);
+  - Payment schedule (to run a scheduler for upcoming payments);
+  - Operation and recipient (to see a summary of operations, with the 
+    origin and the destination of the money);
+  - Loan simulation;
+  - Database backup;
+  - Options and configuration.
  .
- It runs using Apache for web server and MySQL for the database.
+ It needs an Apache web server and MySQL as database server software.
  .
   Homepage: http://myphpmoney.sourceforge.net
Template: myphpmoney/configuration
Type: boolean
Default: false
_Description: Do you want to configure MyPhpMoney now?
 MyPhpMoney needs to be configured before its use: the MySQL database
 should be created and the Apache web server should be configured.
 .
 To achieve this, you will need to provide the login name and the
 password of the MySQL database server administrator.
 .
 If you want to configure it later, you should run 'dpkg-reconfigure
 myphpmoney'.

Template: myphpmoney/databasemgr_server
Type: string
Default: localhost
_Description: Database server host name:
 The database for MyPhpMoney may be hosted on a remote server.
 .
 Please enter the fully qualified domain name for that system.
 .
 If the database is hosted locally, please enter 'localhost'.

Template: myphpmoney/database_name
Type: string
Default: myphpmoney
_Description: MyPhpMoney database name:
 Please enter the name of the database where MyPhpMoney data will be stored.

Template: myphpmoney/mysql_user
Type: string
Default: myphpmoney
_Description: MySQL database login name:
 Please enter the name of the MySQL account to be used for the MyPhpMoney
 database.
 .
 It will be created if it doesn't already exist.
 .
 Please note that the database server software must be configured to allow
 password authentication.

Template: myphpmoney/database_pass
Type: password
_Description: MySQL database password:
 Please enter the password of the MySQL account to be used for the
 MyPhpMoney database. Leave this blank to use no password.

Template: myphpmoney/mysql_dbadmin
Type: string
Default: root
_Description: MySQL database server administrator:
 Please enter the database server administrator's login name. MySQL 
 database server software generally uses 'root'.

Template: myphpmoney/dbadmpass
Type: password
_Description: MySQL database server administrator password:
 Please enter the database server administrator's password.

Template: myphpmoney/dbcreateerror
Type: error
_Description: MyPhpMoney database creation failure
 The MyPhpMoney installation program failed to properly set up a database.
 Please make sure all of the parameters you supplied are correct and that
 your database server software is running.
 .
 Please re-install MyPhpMoney to create the database.

Template: myphpmoney/postrm_remove_database
Type: boolean
Default: false
_Description: Remove database after purging the myphpmoney package?
 Please choose whether MyPhpMoney's database should be removed when
 the myphpmoney package is purged.
Source: myphpmoney
Section: utils
Priority: optional
Maintainer: Debian QA Group <packages@qa.debian.org>
Build-Depends: debhelper (>> 4.1.16)
Standards-Version: 3.7.2

Package: myphpmoney
Architecture: all
Depends: apache (>= 1.3.29.0.1-1) | apache-ssl (>= 1.3.29.0.1-1) | apache-perl (>= 1.3.29.0.1-1) | httpd, php4 (>= 4.0.3pl1) | php4-cgi (>= 4.0.3pl1) | libapache-mod-php4 | libapache2-mod-php4, php4-mysql, php4-gd, mysql-client, wwwconfig-common (>= 0.0.19), ttf-bitstream-vera, ${misc:Depends}
Recommends: mysql-server-4.1 | mysql-server-5.0
Description: finance manager
 MyPhpMoney includes 6 modules:
  - Accounting book (to enter operations and balance accounts);
  - Payment schedule (to run a scheduler for upcoming payments);
  - Operation and recipient (to see a summary of operations, with the 
    origin and the destination of the money);
  - Loan simulation;
  - Database backup;
  - Options and configuration.
 .
 It needs an Apache web server and MySQL as database server software.
 .
  Homepage: http://myphpmoney.sourceforge.net

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