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[RFR] templates://norwegian/{wnorwegian.templates.in,inorwegian.templates. in,aspell-no.templates}



Please find, for review, the debconf templates of norwegian.

This review will last from Saturday, June 30, 2007 to Tuesday, July 10, 2007.

Please send reviews as unified diffs (diff -u) against the original
files. Comments about your proposed changes will be appreciated.

Your review should be sent as an answer to this mail.

When appropriate, I will send intermediate requests for review, with
"[RFRn]" (n>=2) as a subject tag.

When we will reach a consensus, I send a "Last Chance For
Comments" mail with "[LCFC]" as a subject tag.

Finally, the reviewed templates will be sent to the package maintainer
as a bug report, and a mail will be sent to this list with "[BTS]" as
a subject tag.

--- norwegian.old/debian/wnorwegian.templates.in	2007-06-21 10:28:01.637216781 +0200
+++ norwegian/debian/wnorwegian.templates.in	2007-06-28 07:54:41.830286860 +0200
@@ -3,10 +3,9 @@
 # bokmaal is an ASCII translitteration. aa is in fact the <U00C5>
 # Unicode glyph, rendered as a lower a with a ring above.  Please
 # use this glyph when available.  The HTML entity is &aring;
-_Choices: nynorsk, bokmaal
+__Choices: nynorsk, bokmaal

Split out both strings (minimize translator mistakes, etc)

 Default: bokmaal
-_Description: Which variant?
- As you might know, Norwegian has two different written forms bokmaal and
- nynorsk.
+_Description: Norwegian language variant:
+ Norwegian has two different written forms, namely bokmaal and nynorsk.

Follow advices from the developers reference for "select" messages:
use prompt-style instead of interrogative form.

Use more formal writing style than directly addressing the user.

  .
- Which one do you want to use?
+ Please choose the one you wish to use.

Again DevRef suggestions to avoid using the interrogative form in the
long description.


--- norwegian.old/debian/control	2007-06-21 10:28:01.637216781 +0200
+++ norwegian/debian/control	2007-06-28 08:09:27.818059949 +0200
@@ -10,7 +10,7 @@
 Depends: ispell, debconf | debconf-2.0, dictionaries-common
 Provides: ispell-dictionary
 Description: Norwegian dictionary for ispell
- This is the Norwegian dictionary, to be used with ispell
+ This package provides the Norwegian dictionary, to be used with ispell
  to check and correct spelling in Norwegian texts.

General writing style among packages: avoid using "This is <foo>"

 
+ This package provides the Norwegian bokmål dictionary for the 'myspell' spellchecker

This should probably be "Bokmål" with a capital here, indeed. Ditto
for nynorsk later.


Template: wnorwegian/whichvariant
Type: select
# bokmaal is an ASCII translitteration. aa is in fact the <U00C5>
# Unicode glyph, rendered as a lower a with a ring above.  Please
# use this glyph when available.  The HTML entity is &aring;
__Choices: nynorsk, bokmaal
Default: bokmaal
_Description: Norwegian language variant:
 Norwegian has two different written forms, namely bokmaal and nynorsk.
 .
 Please choose the one you wish to use.
Template: inorwegian/whichvariant
Type: select
# bokmaal is an ASCII translitteration. aa is in fact the <U00C5>
# Unicode glyph, rendered as a lower a with a ring above.  Please
# use this glyph when available.  The HTML entity is &aring;
__Choices: nynorsk, bokmaal
Default: bokmaal
_Description: Norwegian language variant:
 Norwegian has two different written forms, namely bokmaal and nynorsk.
 .
 Please choose the one you wish to use.
Template: aspell-no/whichvariant
Type: select
# bokmaal is an ASCII translitteration. aa is in fact the <U00C5>
# Unicode glyph, rendered as a lower a with a ring above.  Please
# use this glyph when available.  The HTML entity is &aring;
_Choices: nynorsk, bokmaal
Default: bokmaal
_Description: Which variant?
 As you might know, Norwegian has two different written forms bokmaal and
 nynorsk.
 .
 Which one do you want aspell to use as Norwegian?
--- ../norwegian.old/debian/wnorwegian.templates.in	2007-06-21 10:28:01.637216781 +0200
+++ debian/wnorwegian.templates.in	2007-06-28 07:54:41.830286860 +0200
@@ -3,10 +3,9 @@
 # bokmaal is an ASCII translitteration. aa is in fact the <U00C5>
 # Unicode glyph, rendered as a lower a with a ring above.  Please
 # use this glyph when available.  The HTML entity is &aring;
-_Choices: nynorsk, bokmaal
+__Choices: nynorsk, bokmaal
 Default: bokmaal
-_Description: Which variant?
- As you might know, Norwegian has two different written forms bokmaal and
- nynorsk.
+_Description: Norwegian language variant:
+ Norwegian has two different written forms, namely bokmaal and nynorsk.
  .
- Which one do you want to use?
+ Please choose the one you wish to use.
--- ../norwegian.old/debian/inorwegian.templates.in	2007-06-21 10:28:01.637216781 +0200
+++ debian/inorwegian.templates.in	2007-06-28 07:54:38.830435667 +0200
@@ -3,10 +3,9 @@
 # bokmaal is an ASCII translitteration. aa is in fact the <U00C5>
 # Unicode glyph, rendered as a lower a with a ring above.  Please
 # use this glyph when available.  The HTML entity is &aring;
-_Choices: nynorsk, bokmaal
+__Choices: nynorsk, bokmaal
 Default: bokmaal
-_Description: Which variant?
- As you might know, Norwegian has two different written forms, bokmaal and
- nynorsk.
+_Description: Norwegian language variant:
+ Norwegian has two different written forms, namely bokmaal and nynorsk.
  .
- Which one do you want ispell to use as Norwegian?
+ Please choose the one you wish to use.
--- ../norwegian.old/debian/control	2007-06-21 10:28:01.637216781 +0200
+++ debian/control	2007-06-28 08:09:27.818059949 +0200
@@ -10,7 +10,7 @@
 Depends: ispell, debconf | debconf-2.0, dictionaries-common
 Provides: ispell-dictionary
 Description: Norwegian dictionary for ispell
- This is the Norwegian dictionary, to be used with ispell
+ This package provides the Norwegian dictionary, to be used with ispell
  to check and correct spelling in Norwegian texts.
 
 Package: wnorwegian
@@ -18,15 +18,14 @@
 Depends: debconf | debconf-2.0, dictionaries-common
 Provides: wordlist
 Description: Norwegian wordlist
- This is a list of Norwegian names and words, to be used for
- whatever purpose you may think of.
+ This package provides a list of Norwegian names and words, for general use.
 
 Package: aspell-no
 Architecture: any
 Depends: aspell (>= 0.60.3-2), debconf | debconf-2.0
 Provides: aspell6a-dictionary
 Description: Norwegian dictionary for aspell
- Those are the Norwegian dictionaries, to be used with
+ This package provides the Norwegian dictionaries, to be used with
  aspell to check and correct spelling in Norwegian texts.
 
 Package: myspell-nb
@@ -34,8 +33,8 @@
 Depends: dictionaries-common (>> 0.10) | openoffice.org-updatedicts
 Provides: myspell-dictionary, myspell-dictionary-nb, openoffice.org-spellcheck-nb
 Description: Norwegian bokmål dictionary for myspell
- This is the Norwegian bokmål dictionary for myspell spellchecker
- which is currently used within OpenOffice.org and the mozilla
+ This package provides the Norwegian bokmål dictionary for the 'myspell' spellchecker
+ which is currently used within OpenOffice.org and the Mozilla
  spellchecker.
 
 Package: myspell-nn
@@ -43,8 +42,8 @@
 Depends: dictionaries-common (>> 0.10) | openoffice.org-updatedicts
 Provides: myspell-dictionary, myspell-dictionary-nn, openoffice.org-spellcheck-nn
 Description: Norwegian nynorsk dictionary for myspell
- This is the Norwegian nynorsk dictionary for myspell spellchecker
- which is currently used within OpenOffice.org and the mozilla
+ This package provides the Norwegian nynorsk dictionary for the 'myspell' spellchecker
+ which is currently used within OpenOffice.org and the Mozilla
  spellchecker.
 
 ### Local Variables: ***
Source: norwegian
Section: text
Priority: optional
Maintainer: Tollef Fog Heen <tfheen@debian.org>
Build-Depends: debhelper (>= 4), ispell, gawk, perl, aspell (>= 0.60.3-2), dictionaries-common-dev (>=0.20), ssed, po-debconf, gettext (>= 0.11), hunspell-tools | myspell-tools
Standards-Version: 3.5.6

Package: inorwegian
Architecture: any
Depends: ispell, debconf | debconf-2.0, dictionaries-common
Provides: ispell-dictionary
Description: Norwegian dictionary for ispell
 This package provides the Norwegian dictionary, to be used with ispell
 to check and correct spelling in Norwegian texts.

Package: wnorwegian
Architecture: all
Depends: debconf | debconf-2.0, dictionaries-common
Provides: wordlist
Description: Norwegian wordlist
 This package provides a list of Norwegian names and words, for general use.

Package: aspell-no
Architecture: any
Depends: aspell (>= 0.60.3-2), debconf | debconf-2.0
Provides: aspell6a-dictionary
Description: Norwegian dictionary for aspell
 This package provides the Norwegian dictionaries, to be used with
 aspell to check and correct spelling in Norwegian texts.

Package: myspell-nb
Architecture: all
Depends: dictionaries-common (>> 0.10) | openoffice.org-updatedicts
Provides: myspell-dictionary, myspell-dictionary-nb, openoffice.org-spellcheck-nb
Description: Norwegian bokmål dictionary for myspell
 This package provides the Norwegian bokmål dictionary for the 'myspell' spellchecker
 which is currently used within OpenOffice.org and the Mozilla
 spellchecker.

Package: myspell-nn
Architecture: all
Depends: dictionaries-common (>> 0.10) | openoffice.org-updatedicts
Provides: myspell-dictionary, myspell-dictionary-nn, openoffice.org-spellcheck-nn
Description: Norwegian nynorsk dictionary for myspell
 This package provides the Norwegian nynorsk dictionary for the 'myspell' spellchecker
 which is currently used within OpenOffice.org and the Mozilla
 spellchecker.

### Local Variables: ***
### coding: utf-8 ***
### End: ***

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