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Re: [RFR] templates://mantis/{templates}



Here's my review.

I insist on the rewrites I made at the beginning, for instance:

--- templates.old	2007-05-29 07:09:25.594601760 +0200
+++ templates	2007-05-29 07:13:38.581891041 +0200
@@ -2,27 +2,28 @@
 Type: string
 Default: mantis@localhost
 _Description: Mantis administrator e-mail address:
- Users will be prompted to send an e-mail to this address when an error
- occurs that requires the intervention of an administrator.
+ Please enter the address of the administrator who will receive mails froms
+ users when an error requires some intervention.
 

Long descriptions should avoid making reference to short
descriptions. This is a style adopted in other packages. So any
construction like "This is foo" should be avoided.

As I reworded all such templates, my rewrite should probably be double
checked.


PS: my patch applies to the templates as reviewed by Kevin, then
Justin.





--- templates.old	2007-05-29 07:09:25.594601760 +0200
+++ templates	2007-05-29 07:13:38.581891041 +0200
@@ -2,27 +2,28 @@
 Type: string
 Default: mantis@localhost
 _Description: Mantis administrator e-mail address:
- Users will be prompted to send an e-mail to this address when an error
- occurs that requires the intervention of an administrator.
+ Please enter the address of the administrator who will receive mails froms
+ users when an error requires some intervention.
 
 Template: mantis/webmaster
 Type: string
 Default: webmaster@localhost
 _Description: Mantis webmaster e-mail address:
- This address is displayed at the bottom of all Mantis pages.
+ Please enter the address that is displayed at the bottom of all Mantis pages.
 
 Template: mantis/from
 Type: string
 Default: mantis@localhost
 _Description: Sender address for bug report e-mails:
- Bug report e-mails from Mantis will be sent from this e-mail address.
+ Please enter the address used as origin address for Mantis bug report e-mails.
 
 Template: mantis/bounce
 Type: string
 Default: mantis@localhost
 _Description: E-mail address for bounce-handling:
- Bounced e-mail is directed to this address. Typically, this should be set to
- be the same as the administrator's e-mail address.
+ Please enter the address where bounced e-mails will be
+ directed. Typically, this should be set to be the same as the
+ administrator's e-mail address.
 
 Template: mantis/webserver
 Type: multiselect
@@ -35,9 +36,9 @@
 
 Template: mantis/passwordnote
 Type: note
-_Description: Change the Administrator's password:
- By default this package is installed with an account for the Administrator.
- The password for this account is: root.
+_Description: Administrator's password to change
+ By default, the mantis package creates an administrator account. 
+ The password for this account is 'root'.
  .
  It is highly recommended to change this password immediately after
- installation is complete.
+ completing the installation.
Template: mantis/admin
Type: string
Default: mantis@localhost
_Description: Mantis administrator e-mail address:
 Please enter the address of the administrator who will receive mails froms
 users when an error requires some intervention.

Template: mantis/webmaster
Type: string
Default: webmaster@localhost
_Description: Mantis webmaster e-mail address:
 Please enter the address that is displayed at the bottom of all Mantis pages.

Template: mantis/from
Type: string
Default: mantis@localhost
_Description: Sender address for bug report e-mails:
 Please enter the address used as origin address for Mantis bug report e-mails.

Template: mantis/bounce
Type: string
Default: mantis@localhost
_Description: E-mail address for bounce-handling:
 Please enter the address where bounced e-mails will be
 directed. Typically, this should be set to be the same as the
 administrator's e-mail address.

Template: mantis/webserver
Type: multiselect
Choices: apache, apache-ssl, apache-perl, apache2
DefaultChoice: apache2
_Description: Web server to configure:
 Apache can be automatically configured to use Mantis by creating links in
 /etc/{apache-version}/conf.d/. Select all the versions of Apache you would
 like to automatically configure.

Template: mantis/passwordnote
Type: note
_Description: Administrator's password to change
 By default, the mantis package creates an administrator account. 
 The password for this account is 'root'.
 .
 It is highly recommended to change this password immediately after
 completing the installation.

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