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Re: [RFR] templates://net-snmp/{snmpd.templates}



The main thing I notice is that it still talks about "NET SNMP"
where its sourceforge page has "Net-SNMP".

> Template: snmpd/upgradefrom521
...
>  The daemon is now started as user snmp, binds to localhost only and SMUX
>  support is disabled.

Or to keep "the daemon" the subject of each clause: "and runs with
SNMP multiplexing (SMUX) support disabled".

> Package: libsnmp-base
...
>  This package includes the MIBs (Management Information Bases) and
>  documentation for the the SNMP libraries, agents and
>  applications. MIBs contain a formal description of the data that can
>  be managed using SNMP. They are used by NET SNMP libraries, agents
>  and applications.

"The the".  I'd reorder and shorten it slightly:

  This package includes documentation and MIBs (Management Information
  Bases) for the SNMP libraries, agents and applications. MIBs contain
  a formal description of the data that can be managed using SNMP.

> Package: libsnmp-perl
...
>  The NET SNMP perl5 support files provide the perl functions for
>  integration of SNMP into applications, written in perl.

Drop the comma.

> Package: libsnmp-python
...
>  The NET SNMP python support files provide the python functions for
>  integration of SNMP into applications, written in python.

Ditto.
-- 
JBR
Ankh kak! (Ancient Egyptian blessing)
--- ../net-snmp.old/debian/snmpd.templates	2007-05-09 09:17:55.000000000 +0100
+++ debian/snmpd.templates	2007-05-13 19:36:10.000000000 +0100
@@ -1,6 +1,9 @@
+# Should be dropped
+# Not reviewed
+" Unmarked for translation
 Template: snmpd/upgradefrom36
 Type: note
-_Description: Upgrade warning from version 3.6 and below
+Description: Upgrade warning from version 3.6 and below
  Debian now uses the NET SNMP agent/daemon.  Since the new agent uses
  an entirely new configuration file format, any configuration you may have
  previously had can not be automatically updated and must be replaced. 
@@ -11,9 +14,11 @@
 
 Template: snmpd/upgradefrom521
 Type: note
-_Description: Upgrade warning from version 5.2.1 and below
- Debian has changed the default start parameters of the snmpd agent/daemon.
- The daemon is now started as user snmp, binds to localhost only and SMUX
- support is disabled. These parameters can all be individually changed in
- /etc/default/snmpd. Please see /usr/share/doc/snmpd/NEWS.Debian.gz for
- more details.
+_Description: Default parameters changed since version 5.2.1
+ The default start parameters of the snmpd agent/daemon have been changed.
+ .
+ The daemon is now started as user snmp, binds to localhost only and runs
+ with SNMP multiplexing (SMUX) support disabled. These parameters can all
+ be individually changed in /etc/default/snmpd.
+ .
+ Please see /usr/share/doc/snmpd/NEWS.Debian.gz for more details.
--- ../net-snmp.old/debian/control	2007-05-13 21:58:23.000000000 +0100
+++ debian/control	2007-05-13 19:38:43.000000000 +0100
@@ -16,11 +16,13 @@
 Conflicts: snmp (<<3.6-3), snmptraplogd
 Replaces: snmptraplogd
 Depends: ${shlibs:Depends}, adduser, debconf
-Description: NET SNMP (Simple Network Management Protocol) Agents
+Description: SNMP (Simple Network Management Protocol) agents
  The Simple Network Management Protocol (SNMP) provides a framework
  for the exchange of management information between agents (servers)
- and clients.  The NET SNMP agent is a daemon which listens for
- incoming SNMP requests from clients and provides responses.
+ and clients.
+ .
+ The Net-SNMP agent is a daemon which listens for incoming SNMP
+ requests from clients and provides responses.
 
 Package: snmp
 Section: net
@@ -28,11 +30,13 @@
 Architecture: any
 Recommends: perl-modules
 Depends: ${shlibs:Depends}
-Description: NET SNMP (Simple Network Management Protocol) Apps
+Description: SNMP (Simple Network Management Protocol) applications
  The Simple Network Management Protocol (SNMP) provides a framework
  for the exchange of management information between agents (servers)
- and clients.  The NET SNMP applications are a collection of command
- line clients for issuing SNMP requests to agents.
+ and clients. 
+ .
+ The Net-SNMP applications are a collection of command line clients
+ for issuing SNMP requests to agents.
 
 Package: libsnmp-base
 Section: libs
@@ -42,13 +46,14 @@
 Provides: libsnmp
 Conflicts: libsnmp
 Depends: 
-Description: NET SNMP (Simple Network Management Protocol) MIBs and Docs
+Description: SNMP (Simple Network Management Protocol) MIBs and documentation
  The Simple Network Management Protocol (SNMP) provides a framework
  for the exchange of management information between agents (servers)
- and clients.  This package includes the MIBs (Management Information
- Bases) and documentation for the the SNMP libraries, agents and
- applications.  MIBs contain a formal description of the data that can
- be managed using SNMP.  They are used by NET SNMP libraries, agents
+ and clients.
+ .
+ This package includes documentation and MIBs (Management Information
+ Bases) for the SNMP libraries, agents and applications. MIBs contain
+ a formal description of the data that can be managed using SNMP.
  and applications.
 
 Package: libsnmp15
@@ -57,12 +62,14 @@
 Architecture: any
 Replaces: snmp (<=3.6.2-3), snmpd (<=4.1.2-1)
 Depends: libsnmp-base (>=${Source-Version}), ${shlibs:Depends}
-Description: NET SNMP (Simple Network Management Protocol) Library
+Description: SNMP (Simple Network Management Protocol) library
  The Simple Network Management Protocol (SNMP) provides a framework
  for the exchange of management information between agents (servers)
- and clients.  The NET SNMP library contains common functions for the
- construction, sending, receiving, decoding, and manipulation of the
- SNMP requests and responses.
+ and clients.
+ .
+ The Net-SNMP library contains common functions for the construction,
+ sending, receiving, decoding, and manipulation of the SNMP requests
+ and responses.
 
 Package: libsnmp15-dev
 Section: libdevel
@@ -72,23 +79,27 @@
 Provides: libsnmp-dev
 Conflicts: libsnmp-dev, libsnmp5-dev, libsnmp9-dev, libsnmp10-dev
 Depends: libc6-dev, libsnmp15 (=${Source-Version}), libsnmp-perl (=${Source-Version}), libwrap0-dev, libssl-dev, procps, ${os-specific-dev}
-Description: NET SNMP (Simple Network Management Protocol) Development Files
+Description: SNMP (Simple Network Management Protocol) development files
  The Simple Network Management Protocol (SNMP) provides a framework
  for the exchange of management information between agents (servers)
- and clients.  The NET SNMP development files include the library
- headers, static libraries, and documentation needed for development
- of custom SNMP applications.
+ and clients.
+ .
+ The Net-SNMP development files include the library headers, static
+ libraries, and documentation needed for development of custom SNMP
+ applications.
 
 Package: libsnmp-perl
 Section: perl
 Priority: optional
 Architecture: any
 Depends: ${perl:Depends}, libsnmp15 (=${Source-Version})
-Description: NET SNMP (Simple Network Management Protocol) Perl5 Support
+Description: SNMP (Simple Network Management Protocol) Perl5 support
  The Simple Network Management Protocol (SNMP) provides a framework
  for the exchange of management information between agents (servers)
- and clients.  The NET SNMP perl5 support files provide the perl
- functions for integration of SNMP into applications, written in perl.
+ and clients.
+ .
+ The Net-SNMP perl5 support files provide the perl functions for
+ integration of SNMP into applications written in perl.
 
 Package: libsnmp-python
 Section: python
@@ -100,18 +111,22 @@
 Description: SNMP (Simple Network Management Protocol) Python support
  The Simple Network Management Protocol (SNMP) provides a framework
  for the exchange of management information between agents (servers)
- and clients.  The NET SNMP python support files provide the python
- functions for integration of SNMP into applications, written in python.
+ and clients.
+ .
+ The Net-SNMP python support files provide the python functions for
+ integration of SNMP into applications written in python.
 
 Package: tkmib
 Section: net
 Priority: optional
 Architecture: all
 Depends: libsnmp-perl (>=${Source-Version}), perl-tk
-Description: NET SNMP (Simple Network Management Protocol) MIB Browser
+Description: SNMP (Simple Network Management Protocol) MIB browser
  The Simple Network Management Protocol (SNMP) provides a framework
  for the exchange of management information between agents (servers)
- and clients.  The NET SNMP MIB (Management Information Base) Browser
- provides a graphical frontend for the NET SNMP tools.  It can be used
- to browse the MIB tree and interactively send requests to SNMP  agents.
+ and clients.
+ .
+ The Net-SNMP MIB (Management Information Base) Browser provides a
+ graphical frontend for the Net-SNMP tools. It can be used to browse
+ the MIB tree and interactively send requests to SNMP agents.
 
# Should be dropped
# Not reviewed
" Unmarked for translation
Template: snmpd/upgradefrom36
Type: note
Description: Upgrade warning from version 3.6 and below
 Debian now uses the NET SNMP agent/daemon.  Since the new agent uses
 an entirely new configuration file format, any configuration you may have
 previously had can not be automatically updated and must be replaced. 
 Consequently, a security-conscious configuration will be installed by
 default.  Please read the snmpd.conf(5) manual page and then edit
 /etc/snmp/snmpd.conf accordingly to change the configuration to suit your
 needs.

Template: snmpd/upgradefrom521
Type: note
_Description: Default parameters changed since version 5.2.1
 The default start parameters of the snmpd agent/daemon have been changed.
 .
 The daemon is now started as user snmp, binds to localhost only and runs
 with SNMP multiplexing (SMUX) support disabled. These parameters can all
 be individually changed in /etc/default/snmpd.
 .
 Please see /usr/share/doc/snmpd/NEWS.Debian.gz for more details.
Source: net-snmp
Section: net
Priority: optional
Maintainer: Net-SNMP Packaging Team <pkg-net-snmp-devel@lists.alioth.debian.org>
Uploaders: Jochen Friedrich <jochen@scram.de>, Thomas Anders <tanders@users.sourceforge.net>
Build-Depends: debhelper (>=5), libtool, libwrap0-dev, libssl-dev (>> 0.9.8), perl (>=5.8), libperl-dev, python-all-dev, python-central (>=0.5.6), python (>=2.3.5-7), python-setuptools (>=0.6b3-1), autoconf, automake1.9, debianutils (>=1.13.1), bash (>=2.05), findutils (>=4.1.20), procps, cdbs (>=0.4.40), libkvm-dev [kfreebsd-i386 kfreebsd-amd64], libsensors-dev (>=2.8.5) [!hurd-i386 !kfreebsd-i386 !kfreebsd-amd64]
Standards-Version: 3.7.2
XS-Vcs-Svn: svn://svn.debian.org/pkg-net-snmp/
XS-Vcs-Browser: http://svn.debian.org/wsvn/pkg-net-snmp/
XS-Python-Version: all

Package: snmpd
Section: net
Priority: optional
Architecture: any
Conflicts: snmp (<<3.6-3), snmptraplogd
Replaces: snmptraplogd
Depends: ${shlibs:Depends}, adduser, debconf
Description: SNMP (Simple Network Management Protocol) agents
 The Simple Network Management Protocol (SNMP) provides a framework
 for the exchange of management information between agents (servers)
 and clients.
 .
 The Net-SNMP agent is a daemon which listens for incoming SNMP
 requests from clients and provides responses.

Package: snmp
Section: net
Priority: optional
Architecture: any
Recommends: perl-modules
Depends: ${shlibs:Depends}
Description: SNMP (Simple Network Management Protocol) applications
 The Simple Network Management Protocol (SNMP) provides a framework
 for the exchange of management information between agents (servers)
 and clients. 
 .
 The Net-SNMP applications are a collection of command line clients
 for issuing SNMP requests to agents.

Package: libsnmp-base
Section: libs
Priority: optional
Architecture: all
Replaces: snmp (<=3.6.2-3), libsnmp, zebra, zebra-pj, quagga
Provides: libsnmp
Conflicts: libsnmp
Depends: 
Description: SNMP (Simple Network Management Protocol) MIBs and documentation
 The Simple Network Management Protocol (SNMP) provides a framework
 for the exchange of management information between agents (servers)
 and clients.
 .
 This package includes documentation and MIBs (Management Information
 Bases) for the SNMP libraries, agents and applications. MIBs contain
 a formal description of the data that can be managed using SNMP.
 and applications.

Package: libsnmp15
Section: libs
Priority: optional
Architecture: any
Replaces: snmp (<=3.6.2-3), snmpd (<=4.1.2-1)
Depends: libsnmp-base (>=${Source-Version}), ${shlibs:Depends}
Description: SNMP (Simple Network Management Protocol) library
 The Simple Network Management Protocol (SNMP) provides a framework
 for the exchange of management information between agents (servers)
 and clients.
 .
 The Net-SNMP library contains common functions for the construction,
 sending, receiving, decoding, and manipulation of the SNMP requests
 and responses.

Package: libsnmp15-dev
Section: libdevel
Priority: optional
Architecture: any
Replaces: libsnmp-dev, libsnmp-perl (<<${Source-Version})
Provides: libsnmp-dev
Conflicts: libsnmp-dev, libsnmp5-dev, libsnmp9-dev, libsnmp10-dev
Depends: libc6-dev, libsnmp15 (=${Source-Version}), libsnmp-perl (=${Source-Version}), libwrap0-dev, libssl-dev, procps, ${os-specific-dev}
Description: SNMP (Simple Network Management Protocol) development files
 The Simple Network Management Protocol (SNMP) provides a framework
 for the exchange of management information between agents (servers)
 and clients.
 .
 The Net-SNMP development files include the library headers, static
 libraries, and documentation needed for development of custom SNMP
 applications.

Package: libsnmp-perl
Section: perl
Priority: optional
Architecture: any
Depends: ${perl:Depends}, libsnmp15 (=${Source-Version})
Description: SNMP (Simple Network Management Protocol) Perl5 support
 The Simple Network Management Protocol (SNMP) provides a framework
 for the exchange of management information between agents (servers)
 and clients.
 .
 The Net-SNMP perl5 support files provide the perl functions for
 integration of SNMP into applications written in perl.

Package: libsnmp-python
Section: python
Priority: optional
Architecture: any
Depends: ${python:Depends}, ${shlibs:Depends}, libsnmp15 (=${Source-Version})
XB-Python-Version: ${python:Versions}
Provides: ${python:Provides}
Description: SNMP (Simple Network Management Protocol) Python support
 The Simple Network Management Protocol (SNMP) provides a framework
 for the exchange of management information between agents (servers)
 and clients.
 .
 The Net-SNMP python support files provide the python functions for
 integration of SNMP into applications written in python.

Package: tkmib
Section: net
Priority: optional
Architecture: all
Depends: libsnmp-perl (>=${Source-Version}), perl-tk
Description: SNMP (Simple Network Management Protocol) MIB browser
 The Simple Network Management Protocol (SNMP) provides a framework
 for the exchange of management information between agents (servers)
 and clients.
 .
 The Net-SNMP MIB (Management Information Base) Browser provides a
 graphical frontend for the Net-SNMP tools. It can be used to browse
 the MIB tree and interactively send requests to SNMP agents.


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