Below please find a diff against the RFR. As I'm new to this list and review process, I'm not 100% sure how everyone would like to see these comments and proposed changes, so please let me know if I mess things up a bit. I read through some of the previous reviews/comments and have tried to mimic what I saw there. Some thoughts on this particular template: I actually preferred the original usage of 'improve performance' over the addition of the word 'the' in the section immediately below. I am not sure which is grammatically correct, but the original reads better for me. In order to be consistent throughout the package (see usage in the control file), I added dashes to single-user. Kevin --- webcalendar.templates~ 2007-04-21 17:43:49.000000000 -0400 +++ webcalendar.templates 2007-04-21 17:52:52.000000000 -0400 @@ -2,7 +2,7 @@ Type: boolean Default: false _Description: Use persistent connections? - Using persistent connections can improve the performance on heavily loaded + Using persistent connections can improve performance on heavily loaded websites by using a previously opened SQL connection. Template: webcalendar/conf/use_http_auth @@ -11,23 +11,23 @@ _Description: Use HTTP authentication? WebCalendar by default uses the database's webcal_user table for authenticating users. You can use HTTP authentication logins - instead and use Apache to manage logins. That will still require adding - the users to WebCalendar. + instead and use Apache to manage logins. If you use Apache you will still + need to add users to WebCalendar. Template: webcalendar/conf/single_user_mode Type: boolean Default: false _Description: Should WebCalendar be installed in single user mode? - WebCalendar can be installed in single user mode or multiuser mode. If it - is installed in single user mode, no login will be required. - . - Using the single user mode is not recommended unless the software runs + WebCalendar can be installed in single-user mode or multi-user mode. If it + is installed in single-user mode, no login will be required. + . + Using the single-user mode is not recommended unless the software runs on a personal server protected by a firewall. Template: webcalendar/conf/single_user_login Type: string _Description: Name of the WebCalendar user: - If WebCalendar is installed in single user mode, you need to specify + If WebCalendar is installed in single-user mode, you need to specify the name of the user to connect as. Template: webcalendar/status/debconf_managed -- Kevin Coyner GnuPG key: 1024D/8CE11941
--- webcalendar.templates~ 2007-04-21 17:43:49.000000000 -0400 +++ webcalendar.templates 2007-04-21 17:52:52.000000000 -0400 @@ -2,7 +2,7 @@ Type: boolean Default: false _Description: Use persistent connections? - Using persistent connections can improve the performance on heavily loaded + Using persistent connections can improve performance on heavily loaded websites by using a previously opened SQL connection. Template: webcalendar/conf/use_http_auth @@ -11,23 +11,23 @@ _Description: Use HTTP authentication? WebCalendar by default uses the database's webcal_user table for authenticating users. You can use HTTP authentication logins - instead and use Apache to manage logins. That will still require adding - the users to WebCalendar. + instead and use Apache to manage logins. If you use Apache you will still + need to add users to WebCalendar. Template: webcalendar/conf/single_user_mode Type: boolean Default: false _Description: Should WebCalendar be installed in single user mode? - WebCalendar can be installed in single user mode or multiuser mode. If it - is installed in single user mode, no login will be required. - . - Using the single user mode is not recommended unless the software runs + WebCalendar can be installed in single-user mode or multi-user mode. If it + is installed in single-user mode, no login will be required. + . + Using the single-user mode is not recommended unless the software runs on a personal server protected by a firewall. Template: webcalendar/conf/single_user_login Type: string _Description: Name of the WebCalendar user: - If WebCalendar is installed in single user mode, you need to specify + If WebCalendar is installed in single-user mode, you need to specify the name of the user to connect as. Template: webcalendar/status/debconf_managed
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