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Re: Debconf rewrite project: review the call-new.txt mail

Dominic Hargreaves <dom@earth.li> wrote:
> -If you have read so far, please find the POT file in attachement.
> +If you have read so far, please find attached the POT file.

Small suggestion:
If you have read this far, please see the attached POT file.

(The 'find attached ...' is correct but too formal/archaic to follow
the informal 'if you've read this'-style beginning IMO.  Also, the
file is there, whether or not one reads that far.)

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