Re: [RFR3] intent.txt
On Sat, Mar 10, 2007 at 02:12:56PM +0100, Christian Perrier wrote:
> Great review by Dominic and James. This confirms me that we have the
> manpower for this project, indeed.
>
> So, summarizing everything:
Hi Christian,
Not sure whether some of these omissions were deliberate, but some of
them are errors:
> Dear Debian maintainer,
> Even if you are a native English speaker, this process is likely to
> help track down typos or errors and improve consistency between
I put a comma after 'errors'.
> If you approve this process,please let us know by replying to this
> mail. If some work in progress on your side would conflict with such a
> rewrite (such as adding or removing debconf templates), please say so,
> and we will differ the review to later in the development cycle.
s/approve this process,/approve of this process, /
s/differ/defer/ # two different words
> Thanks you for your attention.
s/Thanks/Thank/
Dominic.
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