Re: debconf template: checking of my english for the (source) package dtc
On Fri, Mar 09, 2007 at 10:54:07AM +0100, Christian Perrier wrote:
> Quoting Dominic Hargreaves (dom@earth.li):
> > On Fri, Mar 09, 2007 at 04:48:19PM +0800, Thomas Goirand wrote:
> >
> > > I would like to know if any of you would be so kind as to check the
> > > spelling and wording of my english template attached to this message for
> > > my package dtc.
> >
> > I'll look at this during the morning.
>
>
> I personnally already began a bis rewrite of these templates. See
> attached file.
Thanks for this version.
Here is a review. (patch should be attached)
I don't really understand this template:
_Description: Use Cyrus mail system?
Please choose this option if you are using Cyrus for mail
delivery, imap and MTA. This option is only compatible with Postfix.
(I don't use Cyrus, some this may explain my understanding problem).
If one uses Cyrus as MTA, does she also have to use Postfix?
Thomas, does it sounds OK to you?
Also, does one *must* answer positively to that question if she uses Cyrus,
or is it just recommended because it provides another functionality (in
that case, which one)?
Kind Regards,
--
Nekral
--- /tmp/dtc.templates.org 2007-03-09 11:16:01.000000000 +0100
+++ /tmp/dtc.templates 2007-03-09 11:44:47.000000000 +0100
@@ -14,7 +14,7 @@
Template: dtc/conf_mysqlpass
Type: password
-_Description: MySQL administrator assword:
+_Description: MySQL administrator password:
Please enter the password of the MySQL administrator.
Template: dtc/conf_mysqldb
@@ -87,7 +87,7 @@
_Description: Main domain admin password:
Please choose the main domain administrator's password. Access
to the control panel must be managed manually through an .htpasswd
- file in the root path.
+ file in the root path.
Template: dtc/conf_mta_type
Type: select
@@ -102,7 +102,7 @@
Type: boolean
Default: false
_Description: Use Cyrus mail system?
- Please choose this option if you are using the Cyrus for mail
+ Please choose this option if you are using Cyrus for mail
delivery, imap and MTA. This option is only compatible with Postfix.
Template: dtc/conf_apache_version
@@ -115,11 +115,11 @@
Template: dtc/conf_use_nated_vhosts
Type: boolean
Default: false
-_Description: Use "nated" vhosts?
+_Description: Use "NATed" vhosts?
DTC can generate configuration files for Apache to have it use an IP
address of your server. In case the server is firewalled with NAT and
port redirections of public IP(s) address(es), you can request for
- the generation of "nated" vhosts.
+ the generation of "NATed" vhosts.
.
Do not choose this option if the server is directly connected to the
Internet, except when using dynamic IP addresses. In such case, NAT
@@ -136,7 +136,7 @@
Type: boolean
Default: false
_Description: Generate an OpenSSL certificate for DTC?
- If you choose this option, DTC will generate an self signed OpenSSL
+ If you choose this option, DTC will generate a self signed OpenSSL
certificate and will use SSL to browse the panel. SSL will also be
activated and the generated Apache configuration will activate HTTPS
URLs for the control panel.
@@ -157,7 +157,7 @@
Type: string
Default: FR
_Description: DTC SSL certificate 2 letters country code:
- Please enter the 2 letter country code of your server location. Example:
+ Please enter the 2 letter country code of your server location. Examples:
AU, UK, US, FR, DE, etc.
Template: dtc/conf_cert_locality
@@ -193,7 +193,7 @@
Default: true
_Description: Update pear installation?
You can ask DTC to check your pear installation during install. This
- REQUIRES a network connection to the internet. If you can't do so here,
+ REQUIRES a network connection to the Internet. If you can't do so here,
please check that you have the following PEAR modules up-to-date:
Crypt_CBC and Auth_SASL. The files should be in /usr/share/php if you
want to check.
@@ -220,7 +220,7 @@
except the operating system (Debian in your case), IP address of the setup
(the IP is used as an identifier so GPLHost don't account upgrades and/or
reinstallations, it will never be used for commercial purpose). You have
- to be connected to internet and wget must be installed to do the report.
+ to be connected to Internet and wget must be installed to do the report.
Template: dtc/conf_omit_dev_mknod
Type: boolean
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