Re: Read: debconf template file (b2evolution package)
On Mon, Jul 03, 2006 at 07:42:38PM +0100, MJ Ray wrote:
> xavier@caroxav.be (Xavier Luthi)
> > As english isn't my mother tongue, I'm kindly asking some english native sp=
> > eakers hanging around here to review my debconf template file attached to t=
> > his mail.
>
> It was mostly fine. Here are my suggested changes:
Thank you very much for your review. I'll apply the suggested changes.
--
Xavier
>
> --- templates.orig 2006-07-03 19:21:42.000000000 +0100
> +++ templates 2006-07-03 19:33:26.000000000 +0100
> @@ -1,58 +1,58 @@
> Template: b2evolution/db_ask
> Type: boolean
> _Description: Create the database automatically?
> - b2evolution needs a database to be configured and correctly initialized.
> + b2evolution needs a database to be configured and initialized correctly.
> .
> This operation can be performed automatically for a MySQL database, if your MySQL server is currently running. You will only be prompted for the database name.
> .
> Automatically creating the database does not make sense if a b2evolution
> - database already exists or if no database server has been setup when
> - b2evolution is installed.
> + database already exists, or if no database server was configured when
> + b2evolution was installed.
>
> Template: b2evolution/db_name
> Type: string
> Default: b2evolution
> _Description: b2evolution database name:
> - All the tables relative to b2evolution will be installed in a new database. Please enter a name that does not correspond to an already existing database.
> + All the tables used by b2evolution will be installed in a new database. Please enter a name that does not correspond to an existing database.
>
> Template: b2evolution/host
> Type: string
> Default: http://www.example.com/b2evolution
> -_Description: URL to reach your blogs:
> +_Description: URL of your blogs:
> Note that if you want to test b2evolution locally, do not enter the machine hostname but use 'http://localhost' instead.
>
> Template: b2evolution/db_manual
> Type: note
> -_Description: Database related configuration
> - Before using your blog you will have to modify the b2evolution configuration file manually.
> +_Description: Database-related configuration
> + Before using your blog, you must modify the b2evolution configuration file manually.
> .
> - You will need to edit /etc/b2evolution/_config.php and modify the database related variables with the appropriate values.
> + You need to edit /etc/b2evolution/_config.php and set the database-related variables to the appropriate values.
>
> Template: b2evolution/apache
> Type: note
> _Description: Web server configuration
> - You may need to configure your web server before using b2evolution, in order to create an alias or setup a particular virtual host.
> + You may need to configure your web server before using b2evolution, in order to create an alias or configure a particular virtual host.
> .
> - You have to do this manually, but a configuration file example can be found under /usr/share/doc/b2evolution/extras/b2evolution.conf.
> + You must do this manually, but an example configuration file can be found at /usr/share/doc/b2evolution/extras/b2evolution.conf
>
> Template: b2evolution/install_auto
> Type: note
> _Description: Database initialization or upgrade
> - The database may now need to be initialized or upgraded. To do so, please point your browser to ${base_url}/install and follow the instructions.
> + The database may need to be initialized or upgraded now. To do so, please point your browser to ${base_url}/install and follow the instructions.
>
> Template: b2evolution/install_manual
> Type: note
> _Description: Database initialization or upgrade
> Before you can use your blog, the database may need to be initialized or upgraded.
> - After the modification of /etc/b2evolution/_config.php and the configuration of the web server, please point your browser to ${base_url}/install and follow the instructions.
> + After editing /etc/b2evolution/_config.php and configuring the web server, please point your browser to ${base_url}/install and follow the instructions.
>
> Template: b2evolution/install_semi_manual
> Type: note
> _Description: Database initialization or upgrade
> Before you can use your blog, the database may need to be initialized or upgraded.
> - After the configuration of your web server, please point your browser to ${base_url}/install and follow the instructions.
> + After configuring your web server, please point your browser to ${base_url}/install and follow the instructions.
>
> Template: b2evolution/db_remove
> Type: boolean
> _Description: Purge the b2evolution database?
> - If you don't need the b2evolution database (${b2evo_db_name}) any longer, it could be purged automatically. The database user and the tables used by b2evolution would be removed.
> + If you don't need the b2evolution database (${b2evo_db_name}) any longer, it could be purged automatically. The database user and tables used by b2evolution would be removed.
>
>
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