Re: please review my template
On Wed, Nov 29, 2006 at 01:00:27PM -0500, Joe Drew wrote:
> Nicolas Boullis wrote:
> > Template: isync/upgrade_1.0
> > Type: note
> > _Description: isync won't refetch locally deleted messages
> > Versions of isync older than 1.0 used to refetch messages that were
s/used to //
here - old versions *still* do that presumably :)
> > locally deleted. Although it was a bug, some people may be using it
> > as a feature. Since 1.0, messages that are locally deleted will be
> > deleted remotely as well. People expecting the old buggy behavior
> > will experience data loss.
>
> This looks fine - I might switch "deleted remotely" for "remotely
> deleted," just to keep it aligned with the previous phrase.
I would use
"deleted locally"
"deleted remotely"
Alternatively, hyphenate:
"locally-deleted"
"remotely-deleted"
as I think these might be closer to the true meaning.
Cheers,
Dominic.
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