Re: Review of install-menu manpage.
On Mon, Nov 28, 2005 at 10:05:41PM -0500, Anthony DeRobertis wrote:
> Bill Allombert wrote:
>
> In addition to Dominic's suggestions:
>
> >
> > .TH install-menu 1 "28 November 2005" "Debian Project" "Debian GNU/Linux manual"
> > .SH NAME
> > install-menu \- Used internally by the Debian menu system to generate
> > the menu files for the various window managers and other menu-aware
>
> Strike "the" before "various."
I would say either "the various window managers", or remove "the
various" altogether. The latter is probably better.
Hamish
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Hamish Moffatt VK3SB <hamish@debian.org> <hamish@cloud.net.au>
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