Re: request for proofreading
Looks pretty good. The patch below is just cosmetic
changes. Is fakeroot installed by 'apt-get build-dep', or
does that need its own step in your instructions?
--- README.Debian.orig Fri Jul 30 11:25:03 2004
+++ README.Debian Fri Jul 30 11:26:50 2004
@@ -11,9 +11,10 @@
You can check one of them or their combinations.
If the game crashes it would be great if you could include backtrace in
-your bugreport. The following describes how to make useful gdb's backtrace:
+your bugreport. The following describes how to make a useful backtrace
+with gdb:
-You will have to rebuilt package to create unstripped binary.
+You will have to rebuild the package to create an unstripped binary.
1) Make sure you've got deb-src lines in your /etc/apt/sources.list file.
2) `apt-get update && apt-get source scorched3d`
@@ -22,7 +23,7 @@
5) `sed -i -e 's/dh_strip/#dh_strip/g' debian/rules`
6) `dpkg-buildpackage -rfakeroot -us -uc`
-Now you have to install created package.
+Now you have to install the created package.
7) `cd .. && sudo dpkg -i scorched3d_<actual-version_your-arch>.deb`
@@ -32,9 +33,9 @@
...and launch the game with the correct option.
-9 `scorched3d -allowexceptions`
+9) `scorched3d -allowexceptions`
-Then try to run the game as usual, if it crash you should obtain core in
+Then try to run the game as usual. If it crashes you should obtain a core in
the current directory. Then run this:
`gdb scorched3d <obtained core>`
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