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Re: Please review these two -- well, four -- paragraphs

Your writing seemed fine to me! (All 4 paragraphs).

> There's another minor issue as well: Would you prefer to say "No Debian 
> package available" or rather "Debian package not available"?

I like the second choice better.

Debian GNU/Linux Operating System
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