Re: Please review these two -- well, four -- paragraphs

To: Tobias Toedter <t.toedter@gmx.net>
Cc: debian-l10n-english@lists.debian.org
Subject: Re: Please review these two -- well, four -- paragraphs
From: "Chris Tillman" <toff1@cox.net>
Date: Fri, 7 May 2004 16:12:00 +0000
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Your writing seemed fine to me! (All 4 paragraphs).

> There's another minor issue as well: Would you prefer to say "No Debian 
> package available" or rather "Debian package not available"?

I like the second choice better.

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