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Bug#400309: Please clean up short description: remove version, reword



Package: linux-2.6
Severity: minor

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Example from apt-cache search:
linux-image-2.6.18-2-xen-vserver-686 - Linux 2.6.18 image on PPro/Celeron/PII/PIII/P4

The version is specified in the package name, the package version, and
the short description; surely the one in the short description can go.
It'd have the nice advantage of getting the apt-cache search line down
below 80 characters:

linux-image-2.6.18-2-xen-vserver-686 - Linux image on PPro/Celeron/PII/PIII/P4

Also, in some other minor wording changes, "on" should probably be
"for". The short description could probably be further improved to:

linux-image-2.6.18-2-xen-vserver-686 - Kernel for PPro/Celeron/PII/PIII/P4

which has the advantage of getting the fact that it is a kernel into the
short description (and is even shorter).

- -- System Information:
Debian Release: 4.0
  APT prefers testing
  APT policy: (500, 'testing'), (130, 'unstable'), (120, 'experimental')
Architecture: amd64 (x86_64)
Shell:  /bin/sh linked to /bin/bash
Kernel: Linux 2.6.18-1-amd64
Locale: LANG=en_US.UTF-8, LC_CTYPE=en_US.UTF-8 (charmap=UTF-8)

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