On Tuesday 31 March 2015, at 07:52 +0200, Niels Thykier wrote:
>
> Nevertheless, I believe it would be prudent if we could start a review
> and the translations in parallel with these remaining items.
Hi!
in file upgrading.dbk it seems to me there is "from" too much. I would
suggest this change:
--- en/upgrading.dbk 2015-04-04 10:47:19.000000000 +0200
+++ en/upgrading.dbk.bea 2015-04-04 11:48:13.000000000 +0200
@@ -1287,7 +1287,7 @@
<para>
When upgrading from &Oldreleasename; to &Releasename;, it can be
a good idea to purge old packages <emphasis>before</emphasis>
- the first reboot. In particular, obsolete init scripts from may
+ the first reboot. In particular, obsolete init scripts may
cause issues. Please see <xref linkend="purge-removed-packages"
/> for details on finding and purging removed packages.
</para>
Thanks,
Beatrice.
P.S. I, as a translator, have commit permission on the release-notes
repository but I thought better not to touch the original English files.
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