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Re: Debian Installer 7.0 Beta1 release

On Ma, 07 aug 12, 19:49:17, Francesca Ciceri wrote:
> The draft of this press release is now available: the idea is to send it
> out in a couple of days. As usual, we'd be grateful for reviews and
> translations. It doesn't seem fantastic to me, so feel free to improve
> the wording! 
> As usual, you can find the draft here:
> http://anonscm.debian.org/viewvc/publicity/announcements/en/2012/2012-08-09-dibeta1.wml?view=markup


See attached a very intrusive patch.

Kind regards,
Offtopic discussions among Debian users and developers:
From 3c4caecb9e4610e9dab8e49c0916a89fc71cd729 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Andrei Popescu <andreimpopescu@gmail.com>
Date: Wed, 8 Aug 2012 09:59:06 +0300
Subject: [PATCH] Rewrite the announcement to mention more changes, but
 without going into too many details.

 announcements/en/2012/2012-08-09-dibeta1.wml |   15 ++++++++-------
 1 file changed, 8 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)

diff --git a/announcements/en/2012/2012-08-09-dibeta1.wml b/announcements/en/2012/2012-08-09-dibeta1.wml
index bc3b300..8edbc80 100644
--- a/announcements/en/2012/2012-08-09-dibeta1.wml
+++ b/announcements/en/2012/2012-08-09-dibeta1.wml
@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
 # $Id$
 # $Rev$
-<define-tag pagetitle>Debian announces first preview of upcoming Wheezy release</define-tag>
+<define-tag pagetitle>Debian announces first beta of the installer for the upcoming Wheezy release</define-tag>
 ## When is this announcement likely to be send out?  Please keep in mind,
 ## that it should also be reviewed and translated
@@ -20,14 +20,15 @@
 The Debian Installer team announced the first beta release of the
 installer for Debian 7.0 <q>Wheezy</q>.
-This new release includes various improvements as, for instance, the new
-official theme <q>Joy</q> as boot background, the addition of
-<q>Wheezy</q> keys to the debian-archive-keyring pacakge as well as an
-update for the Linux kernel, providing variuos fixes.
+This new release includes various improvements in different areas, like booting,
+Linux kernel, APT, low memory installs, and networking. It also uses
+the new official theme <q>Joy</q>. 73 languages are supported for installation
+(56 of them complete).
-More changes are listed in the Debian Installer team's 
+The changes are detailed in the Debian Installer team's 
 <a href="https://lists.debian.org/debian-devel-announce/2012/08/msg00000.html";>announcement</a> to the Debian community.
 There are some <a href="http://www.debian.org/devel/debian-installer/errata";>known
 issues</a> with the installer that do not need to be
 reported, but the Debian installer team do need your help to find more

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