Re: Debian Project News 2011/06 frozen. Please review and translate

[Jeremiah Foster <jeremiah@jeremiahfoster.com>]

On Apr 16, 2011, at 21:38, Filipus Klutiero wrote:

> On 2011-04-16 12:21, David Prévot wrote:
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>> Hi!
>> 
>> We just finished the last bits for the latest issue of the Debian
>> Project News to be released on Monday. We would appreciate reviews and
>> translations.

[...]
>> 
>> Cheers,
>> 
>> David
>> 
> Thank you David and thanks to all other contributors. Here are my remarks:
> 
>> Even though there has been some work in progress towards getting rid
>> of HAL (still used by
>> <code><a href="http://packages.debian.org/xserver-xorg";>xserver-xorg</a></code>
>> on kFreeBSD), Cyril Brulebois mentioned that <a
>> href="http://lists.debian.org/debian-devel/2011/03/msg01194.html";>\
>> it is stalled for now</a>.
> "there has been some work in progress" does not sound right to me. "there is some work in progress", maybe?

Yeah, that is not really correct English. I'll change.
> 
>> <code><a
>> href="http://packages.debian.org/network-manager";>network-manager</a></code>
>> <a href="http://lists.debian.org/debian-devel/2011/04/msg00041.html";>could
>> be adopted</a> to this end, though this proposal has provoked a great many
>> objections, whether
>> <a href="http://lists.debian.org/debian-devel/2011/04/msg00051.html";>\
>> rational</a> or <a href="http://lists.debian.org/debian-devel/2011/04/msg00120.html";>\
>> less so</a>.
> I don't understand the link on "less so".

I think it is trying to highlight a "rational" argument (the first link) and a "less than rational" argument, the second link.

> 
>> As a side note, J&ouml;rg added that during the meeting Ansgar Burchardt was
>> promoted to FTP Assistant: congratulations, Ansgar!
> "promote" is strange here. I suggest:

eh? It is a promotion.

>> As a side note, Ansgar Burchardt started to serve as an FTP Assistant during the meeting; thank you, Ansgar!
> 
>> Cyril Brulebois published the <a
>> href="http://blog.ikibiki.org/2011/04/03/DXN-8/";>eighth</a>, <a
>> href="http://blog.ikibiki.org/2011/04/10/DXN-9/";>ninth</a> and <a
>> href="http://blog.ikibiki.org/2011/04/11/DXN-10/";>tenth</a> issues of his
>> Debian XFS News.
> X11 is no FileSystem!

I have no idea what you're talking about here.

Jeremiah