Re: [RFR] wml://News/weekly/2011/15/index.wml Debian Project News frozen. Please review and translate
Hi,
David Prévot <taffit@debian.org> wrote:
> Hi,
>
> Thanks to many contributors, we just finished the last bits for the
> latest issue of the Debian Project News to be released Monday. We would
> appreciate reviews and translations.
Patch attached.
Holger
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--- dpn-15_index_orig.wml 2011-12-10 09:52:33.010127296 +0100
+++ dpn-15_index_workingcopy.wml 2011-12-10 10:22:33.354119409 +0100
@@ -16,9 +16,9 @@
Debian Project News. To improve the frequency of
<acronym lang="en" title="Debian Project News" >DPN</acronym> and expand its
other activities, the Debian Publicity team is looking for new contributors.
-Did you ever want to help Debian, but every piece software you are interested
+Did you ever want to help Debian, but every piece of software you are interested
in is already packaged? You don't consider yourself a <q>technical person</q>? You
-have basic skills in written English? Perfect! Have you considered
+have basic skills in written English? Perfect! Have you considered
<a href="http://lists.debian.org/debian-project/2011/11/msg00055.html";>joining</a>
the Publicity Team? If you are a Debian member, the Press team is also looking
for new contributors.
@@ -88,7 +88,7 @@
He is also working on a statement to make explicit the position of the Debian
Project on software patents.
The <acronym lang="en" title="Open Source Initiative">OSI</acronym>
-have invited the Debian Project to their upcoming affiliation program.
+has invited the Debian Project to their upcoming affiliation program.
There is also work in progress to have the Debian Project become a member of
the forums for <acronym lang="en" title="Internet Systems Consortium">ISC</acronym>
software that we distribute.
@@ -103,10 +103,10 @@
Appreciation Day</a>, Michael Hall sent Debian
<a href="http://lists.debian.org/debian-devel/2011/11/msg00626.html";>a message
of appreciation</a>, stating <q>Without you we wouldn't be able to make the
-contributions we do. Ubuntu is great because Debian is great, and we appreciate
+contributions we do. Ubuntu is great because Debian is great, and we appreciate
all of the work that goes into making it that way.</q> Michael
<a href="http://www.jonobacon.org/2011/11/17/welcoming-our-new-horseman-michael-hall/";>will
-be joining</a> of Canonical's Community Team, focusing on projects that are
+be joining</a> Canonical's Community Team, focusing on projects that are
upstream for Ubuntu.</p>
@@ -178,18 +178,18 @@
a marathon of Bug squashing parties (BSP) has been started with concurrent BSP
being held in <a href="http://www.debian.org/events/2011/1202-hildesheim-bsp";>Hildesheim</a>,
Germany and <a href="http://www.debian.org/events/2011/1204-ubulocjam-debbsp";>Portland</a>,
-OR, USA. While the first one concentrated on fixing Release Critical Bugs, the
+OR, USA. While the first one concentrated on fixing Release Critical Bugs, the
second one concentrated on creating multiarch patches for different libraries.
</p>
<p>
-Both BSP where quite successful. In Hildesheim <a
+Both BSP where quite successful. In Hildesheim <a
href="http://blog.schmehl.info/Debian/events/bsp-hi-2011-3";>60 release critical bugs
where addressed</a> and several improvements to the <a
href="http://blog.ganneff.de/blog/2011/12/04/bsp-hildesheim.html";>archive
software</a> introduced, while in Portland <a
href="http://web.dodds.net/~vorlon/wiki/blog/Making_jam_from_bugs/";>14
-multiarch</a> where created! They also noted down how to <a
+multiarch patches</a> where created! They also noted down how to <a
href="http://www.outflux.net/blog/archives/2011/12/05/ec2-instances-in-support-of-a-bsp/";>prepare some cloud
instances</a> in preparation of Bug Squashing Parties.
</p>
@@ -254,7 +254,7 @@
<a href="http://interview.lici.it/2011/11/15/an-interview-for-linux-to-stefano-zacchiroli/";>by
<acronym lang="en" title="Linux Certification Institute">Lici.it</acronym></a>
(<a href="http://interview.lici.it/it/2011/11/15/an-interview-for-linux-to-stefano-zacchiroli/";>original in Italian</a>).
-In addition the <a href="http://neuro.debian.net/";>NeuroDebian team</a> were
+In addition the <a href="http://neuro.debian.net/";>NeuroDebian team</a> was
<a href="http://www.floss4science.com/interview-neurodebian/";>interviewed</a>
by FLOSS for Science.</p>
@@ -324,7 +324,7 @@
<p>According to the <a href="http://udd.debian.org/bugs.cgi";>Bugs Search
interface of the Ultimate Debian Database</a>, the upcoming release,
- Debian 6.0 <q>Squeeze</q>, is currently affected by
+ Debian 7.0 <q>Wheezy</q>, is currently affected by
1656 release-critical bugs. Ignoring bugs which are easily solved
or on the way to being solved, roughly speaking, about
849 release-critical bugs remain to be solved for the
@@ -404,7 +404,7 @@
<p>
761 packages were added to the unstable Debian archive
recently. <a href="http://packages.debian.org/unstable/main/newpkg";>Among
-many others</a> are:</p>
+many others</a> that are:</p>
<ul>
<li><a href="http://packages.debian.org/unstable/main/4digits";>\
@@ -441,7 +441,7 @@
<toc-add-entry name="continuedpn">Want to continue reading DPN?</toc-add-entry>
-<p>Please help us create this newsletter. We still need more volunteer writers
+<p>Please help us create this newsletter. We still need more volunteer writers
to watch the Debian community and report about what is going on. Please see the
<a href="http://wiki.debian.org/ProjectNews/HowToContribute";>contributing
page</a> to find out how to help. We're looking forward to receiving your mail
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