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Bug#992157: marked as done (release-notes: warn about SSH at the start of the upgrade paragraph)

Your message dated Sat, 14 Aug 2021 08:00:21 +0200
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and subject line Re: Bug#992157: release-notes: warn about SSH at the start of the upgrade paragraph
has caused the Debian Bug report #992157,
regarding release-notes: warn about SSH at the start of the upgrade paragraph
to be marked as done.

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Package: release-notes
Severity: normal
Tags: patch

Hi,

On IRC I was trigger that we may want to add a warning at the start of
the paragraph 4.4.4 (minimal upgrade).

I prepared the attached patch.

Paul

>From 36acbddbf23c96a9ba141ac2a06e17789e3e45a9 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Paul Gevers <elbrus@debian.org>
Date: Sat, 14 Aug 2021 06:49:56 +0200
Subject: [PATCH] upgrading.dbk: add warning about SSH just before upgrading
 starts

---
 en/upgrading.dbk | 6 ++++++
 1 file changed, 6 insertions(+)

diff --git a/en/upgrading.dbk b/en/upgrading.dbk
index 180c7f39..ecb7fa55 100644
--- a/en/upgrading.dbk
+++ b/en/upgrading.dbk
@@ -972,6 +972,12 @@ E: You don't have enough free space in /var/cache/apt/archives/.
 
   <section id="minimal-upgrade">
     <title>Minimal system upgrade</title>
+    <important>
+      <!-- buster to bullseye -->
+      <para>
+        If you upgrade remotely, be aware of <xref linkend="ssh-not-available"/>.
+      </para>
+    </important>
     <para>
       In some cases, doing the full upgrade (as described below) directly might
       remove large numbers of packages that you will want to keep.  We therefore
-- 
2.30.2

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Hi Justin,

On 14-08-2021 07:34, Justin B Rye wrote:
> Yes, this looks good.  The link text appears as "Section x.y.z, *No
> new SSH connections possible during upgrade*", right?

In HTML, yes, in PDF is says "Section 5.1.23."

> "If you upgrade" might mean "habitually" or "hypothetical future",
> which are two things it's reasonable to be ambiguous between here,
> though it's possible you might have wanted "If you are upgrading
> remotely".

Thanks, I've gone with the latter.

Paul

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