Bug#987007: release-notes: Release notes for Bullseye by Debian Med team
Hi Justin,
On Thu, Apr 15, 2021 at 02:43:39PM +0100, Justin B Rye wrote:
> > the Debian Med team proposes the following text for the Bullseye release notes:
> >
> > <title>News from Debian Med Blend</title>
> >
> > <para>The Debian Med team was involved into the fight against COVID-19
>
> I'd recommend
> <para>
> The Debian Med team has been taking part in the fight against COVID-19
Fixed in Git.
> > by packaging software to research the virus on sequence level as well
> > as fighting the pandemic with tools that are used in epidemiology.
>
> Is this
>
> by packaging software for researching the virus on the sequence level,
> and by fighting the pandemic with the tools used in epidemiology.
>
> or
> by packaging software for researching the virus on the sequence level
> and for fighting the pandemic with the tools used in epidemiology.
The latter - fixed in Git.
> > The effort will be continued in the next release cycle with focus on
> > machine learning tools that are used in both fields.
> > </para><para>
> > Besides adding new packages in the field of life sciences and medicine
> > more and more existing packages received Continuous Integration support.
>
> The existing packages aren't adding new packages; we need something like
>
> Besides the addition of new packages in the field of life sciences and medicine,
> more and more existing packages have gained Continuous Integration support.
Fixed in Git.
> > </para><para>
> > A range of performance critical applications now benefit from
> > <ulink url="https://wiki.debian.org/SIMDEverywhere";>SIMD Everywhere</ulink>.
> > This library allows packages to be available on more hardware platforms
> > supported by Debian, notably on arm64, while maintaining the performance
> ^ ^
> This sentence gets a bit sprawling. Maybe turn the parenthetical
> commas into em-dashes? Or actual parentheses?
>
> This library allows packages to be available on more hardware platforms
> supported by Debian (notably on arm64), while maintaining the performance
Fixed in Git.
> > benefit brought by processors supporting vector extensions, such as AVX on
> > amd64, or NEON on arm64.
> > </para><para>
> > To install packages maintained by the Debian Med team, install the
> > metapackages named med-*, which are at version 3.6.x for Debian Bullseye.
> ^
Fixed in Git.
> > Feel free to visit the
> > <ulink url="http://blends.debian.org/med/tasks";>Debian Med tasks pages</ulink>
> ^
Fixed in Git.
> > to see the full range of biological and medical software available in Debian.
> > </para>
>
> This all looks good to me except that we're lowercasing "bullseye".
>
> Oh, and httpsify that URL.
I'm fine with all your corrections (and updated Git accordingly).
Thanks a lot for the review
Andreas.
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