Bug#947915: release-notes: Suggest cleaning up leftover *.dpkg-old etc. config files

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Cc: "Karl O. Pinc" <kop@karlpinc.com>
Subject: Bug#947915: release-notes: Suggest cleaning up leftover *.dpkg-old etc. config files
From: Justin B Rye <justin.byam.rye@gmail.com>
Date: Sun, 5 Jan 2020 16:34:04 +0000
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I finally got round to reviewing this:

> +  <section id="cleanup-revised-configuration-files">
> +    <title>Cleanup revised configuration files</title>

"Cleanup" is the noun; you want the verb, "Clean up".  And I'm not
sure you want "revised"; I would recommend "leftover", or you could
just omit it.
-- 
JBR	with qualifications in linguistics, experience as a Debian
	sysadmin, and probably no clue about this particular package

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