On Du, 14 apr 19, 21:55:48, Andrei POPESCU wrote: > Hello, > > While reviewing the Romanian translation I found some typos in the > English version. There is also one small rewording included so CCing > -l10n-english. > > Please find attached a patch generated with 'git diff >'. Of course it helps if I actually attache the patch :) Kind regards, Andrei -- http://wiki.debian.org/FAQsFromDebianUser
diff --git a/en/whats-new.dbk b/en/whats-new.dbk index 3f4bff15..d37b4e52 100644 --- a/en/whats-new.dbk +++ b/en/whats-new.dbk @@ -153,7 +153,7 @@ linkend="obsolete"/>. <para> Besides, buster is the first Debian release to ship with Rust based programs - such as Firefox, ripgrep, fd, exa, etc and a significant number of + such as Firefox, ripgrep, fd, exa, etc. and a significant number of Rust based libraries (more than 450). Buster ships with Rustc 1.32. </para> @@ -390,7 +390,7 @@ code. &debian; &releasename; has <literal>AppArmor</literal> enabled per default. <literal>AppArmor</literal> is a mandatory access control framework that allows to restrict programs' capabilities like read, - write and execute permissions on files or mount, ptrace and signal + write and execute permissions on files, or mount, ptrace and signal permissions by defining per-program profiles. </para> <para> @@ -435,9 +435,9 @@ code. <literal>iptables</literal> command line interface. The nftables-based variant, using the <literal>nf_tables</literal> Linux kernel subsystem, is the default in buster. The legacy variant uses - the <literal>x_tables</literal> Linux kernel subsystem. Users can use the - update-alternatives system to select one variant or the other. - </para> + the <literal>x_tables</literal> Linux kernel subsystem. The + update-alternatives system can be used to select one variant or the other. +</para> <para> This applies to all related tools and utilities: <itemizedlist> @@ -473,7 +473,7 @@ code. improvements</ulink>. </para> <para> - This movement is in line with what other major Linux distributions are + This change is in line with what other major Linux distributions are doing, such as RedHat, which now uses <literal>nftables</literal> as its <ulink url="https://access.redhat.com/documentation/en-us/red_hat_enterprise_linux/8-beta/html-single/8.0_beta_release_notes/index#networking_2">default firewalling tool</ulink>. @@ -482,7 +482,7 @@ code. Also, please note that all <literal>iptables</literal> binaries are now installed in <literal>/usr/sbin</literal> instead of <literal>/sbin</literal>. A compatibility symlink is in place, but will be - dropped after the buster release cycle, so hardcoded binary paths + dropped after the buster release cycle. Hardcoded paths to the binaries in scripts will need to be corrected and are worth avoiding. </para> <para>
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