On Du, 14 apr 19, 21:55:48, Andrei POPESCU wrote: > Hello, > > While reviewing the Romanian translation I found some typos in the > English version. There is also one small rewording included so CCing > -l10n-english. > > Please find attached a patch generated with 'git diff >'. Of course it helps if I actually attache the patch :) Kind regards, Andrei -- http://wiki.debian.org/FAQsFromDebianUser
diff --git a/en/whats-new.dbk b/en/whats-new.dbk
index 3f4bff15..d37b4e52 100644
--- a/en/whats-new.dbk
+++ b/en/whats-new.dbk
@@ -153,7 +153,7 @@ linkend="obsolete"/>.
<para>
Besides, buster is the first Debian release to ship with Rust based programs
- such as Firefox, ripgrep, fd, exa, etc and a significant number of
+ such as Firefox, ripgrep, fd, exa, etc. and a significant number of
Rust based libraries (more than 450). Buster ships with Rustc 1.32.
</para>
@@ -390,7 +390,7 @@ code.
&debian; &releasename; has <literal>AppArmor</literal> enabled per
default. <literal>AppArmor</literal> is a mandatory access control
framework that allows to restrict programs' capabilities like read,
- write and execute permissions on files or mount, ptrace and signal
+ write and execute permissions on files, or mount, ptrace and signal
permissions by defining per-program profiles.
</para>
<para>
@@ -435,9 +435,9 @@ code.
<literal>iptables</literal> command line interface. The nftables-based
variant, using the <literal>nf_tables</literal> Linux kernel
subsystem, is the default in buster. The legacy variant uses
- the <literal>x_tables</literal> Linux kernel subsystem. Users can use the
- update-alternatives system to select one variant or the other.
- </para>
+ the <literal>x_tables</literal> Linux kernel subsystem. The
+ update-alternatives system can be used to select one variant or the other.
+</para>
<para>
This applies to all related tools and utilities:
<itemizedlist>
@@ -473,7 +473,7 @@ code.
improvements</ulink>.
</para>
<para>
- This movement is in line with what other major Linux distributions are
+ This change is in line with what other major Linux distributions are
doing, such as RedHat, which now uses <literal>nftables</literal> as its <ulink
url="https://access.redhat.com/documentation/en-us/red_hat_enterprise_linux/8-beta/html-single/8.0_beta_release_notes/index#networking_2";>default
firewalling tool</ulink>.
@@ -482,7 +482,7 @@ code.
Also, please note that all <literal>iptables</literal> binaries are now
installed in <literal>/usr/sbin</literal> instead of
<literal>/sbin</literal>. A compatibility symlink is in place, but will be
- dropped after the buster release cycle, so hardcoded binary paths
+ dropped after the buster release cycle. Hardcoded paths to the binaries
in scripts will need to be corrected and are worth avoiding.
</para>
<para>
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