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Bug#783124: marked as done (release-notes: proofreading updates for installer.dbk)

Your message dated Wed, 22 Apr 2015 20:00:54 +0200
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and subject line Re: Bug#783124: release-notes: proofreading updates for installer.dbk
has caused the Debian Bug report #783124,
regarding release-notes: proofreading updates for installer.dbk
to be marked as done.

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--- Begin Message --- 
Package: release-notes
Severity: normal
Tags: patch

The installing.dbk file still has some worrying gaps - for instance:

> <!-- TODO: Add
>
> Jessie :
>
>    * The partition where to install grub can now be choosen
>
> -->

But here is a proofreading patch for the material we've got so far.
-- 
JBR	with qualifications in linguistics, experience as a Debian
	sysadmin, and probably no clue about this particular package

Index: en/installing.dbk
===================================================================
--- en/installing.dbk	(revision 10808)
+++ en/installing.dbk	(working copy)
@@ -130,7 +130,7 @@
 <term>Desktop selection</term>
 <listitem>
 <para>
-Desktop can now be choosen within tasksel during the installation. Note that
+The desktop can now be chosen within tasksel during installation. Note that
 several desktops can be selected at the same time, but some combinations of
 desktops may not be co-installable.</para>
 </listitem>
@@ -141,8 +141,8 @@
 <term>Replacing "--" by "---" for boot parameters</term>
 <listitem>
 <para>
-Due to a change on the linux kernel side, the "---" separator is now used instead
-of the historical "--" one to separate kernel parameters from userland parameters.
+Due to a change on the Linux kernel side, the "---" separator is now used instead
+of the historical "--" to separate kernel parameters from userland parameters.
 </para>
 </listitem>
 </varlistentry>
@@ -152,8 +152,8 @@
 <term>Graphical installer</term>
 <listitem>
 <para>
-Graphical installer is now the default on supported platforms.
-Text installer is still accessible from the very first menu, or if
+The graphical installer is now the default on supported platforms.
+The text installer is still accessible from the very first menu, or if
 the system has limited capabilities.</para>
 </listitem>
 </varlistentry>
@@ -206,7 +206,7 @@
   <listitem>
     <para>
       The Jessie installer improves support for a lot of UEFI fireware
-      and also supports installing on a 32-bit UEFI firmware with a 64-bit
+      and also supports installing on 32-bit UEFI firmware with a 64-bit
       kernel.
     </para>
     <para>

--- End Message ---
--- Begin Message --- 
On 2015-04-22 19:24, Justin B Rye wrote:
> Package: release-notes
> Severity: normal
> Tags: patch
> 
> The installing.dbk file still has some worrying gaps - for instance:
> 
>> <!-- TODO: Add
>>
>> Jessie :
>>
>>    * The partition where to install grub can now be choosen
>>
>> -->
> 
> But here is a proofreading patch for the material we've got so far.
> 

Thanks, applied as-is.

~Niels

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