Bug#753492: refcard: Typo, wording and item updates
Source: refcard
Source-Version: 5.0.9
Severity: wishlist
Tags: patch
Hi!
Here's a patch, which fixes a typo, makes the Debian distribution
references system-neutral now that we have other non-GNU/Linux released
architectures (although the ip command is Linux-specific), and switches
the debsums item to use the new native «dpkg -V».
(The <https://www.debian.org/doc/user-manuals> still has system
specific references to Debian GNU/Linux.)
Note that I've not build-tested it, as the Build-Depends where quite big.
And sorry for bundling this in a single patch, but splitting it with svn
is rather painful, but I could do that if you wanted though.
Thanks,
Guillem
Index: entries.dbk
===================================================================
--- entries.dbk (revision 10420)
+++ entries.dbk (working copy)
@@ -2,13 +2,11 @@
<!DOCTYPE article PUBLIC "-//OASIS//DTD DocBook XML V4.2//EN"
"http://www.oasis-open.org/docbook/xml/4.2/docbookx.dtd";>
<article lang="en-GB">
- <!-- This file is the translatable part of the Debian GNU/Linux
- Reference Card. -->
- <title>Debian GNU/Linux Reference Card</title>
+ <!-- This file is the translatable part of the Debian Reference Card. -->
+ <title>Debian Reference Card</title>
<!-- subtitle not on printed card, but as 'pdfsubject' in the PDF
file -->
- <subtitle>The 101 most important things when using Debian
- GNU/Linux</subtitle>
+ <subtitle>The 101 most important things when using Debian</subtitle>
<articleinfo>
<copyright>
<year>2004</year>
@@ -501,10 +499,11 @@
<replaceable>pkg</replaceable>.deb</glossterm>
<glossdef><para>Install package files.</para></glossdef>
</glossentry>
- <glossentry id="debsums">
- <glossterm>debsums</glossterm>
- <glossdef><para>Audit check sums of installed packages, needs
- <literal>debsums</literal>.</para></glossdef>
+ <glossentry id="dpkg-verify">
+ <glossterm>dpkg -V</glossterm>
+ <optional><replaceable>names</replaceable></optional></glossterm>
+ <glossdef><para>Audit check sums of installed
+ packages.</para></glossdef>
</glossentry>
<glossentry id="dpkg-divert">
<glossterm>dpkg-divert <optional>options</optional>
Index: refcard.dbk
===================================================================
--- refcard.dbk (revision 10420)
+++ refcard.dbk (working copy)
@@ -2,9 +2,8 @@
<!DOCTYPE article PUBLIC "-//OASIS//DTD DocBook XML V4.2//EN"
"http://www.oasis-open.org/docbook/xml/4.2/docbookx.dtd";>
<article lang="en-GB">
- <title>Debian GNU/Linux Reference Card</title>
- <subtitle>The 101 most important things when using Debian
- GNU/Linux</subtitle>
+ <title>Debian Reference Card</title>
+ <subtitle>The 101 most important things when using Debian</subtitle>
<articleinfo>
<corpauthor>
<ulink
@@ -240,10 +239,10 @@
</keywordset>
<abstract>
<para>The idea of this reference card is to provide new users of
- Debian GNU/Linux with the most important commands. Basic (or
+ Debian with the most important commands. Basic (or
better) knowledge of computers, files, directories and the
command line is required. Some acronyms related to Debian
- GNU/Linux can be found <link linkend="acronyms">here</link>.</para>
+ can be found <link linkend="acronyms">here</link>.</para>
</abstract>
</articleinfo>
<section id="availability">
@@ -872,7 +871,7 @@
not, try again.</para>
<para>Of course, you may alter the reference card to you needs and
- create a cusomised refcard. You need to <command>apt-get
+ create a customised refcard. You need to <command>apt-get
install</command> the following packages first:
<literal>docbook-xsl</literal>,
<literal>pdfjam</literal>,
@@ -936,7 +935,7 @@
</warning>
</section>
<section id="acronyms">
- <title>Acronyms related to Debian GNU/Linux</title>
+ <title>Acronyms related to Debian</title>
<simplelist>
<member><ulink
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