Proofread: http://www.debian.org/doc/manuals/project-history/ch-detailed.en.html

["David Richfield" <davidr@vhf.co.za>]

Hi,

Some typos and fixes for
http://www.debian.org/doc/manuals/project-history/ch-detailed.en.html

"Corel announced it's intentions" -> "Corel announced its intentions"

"This is the first release including PowerPC and ARM ports" -> "This was
the first release including PowerPC and ARM ports"

"This was studied thoroughly by a group of interest" -> ??? I don't even
understand what is meant here...

"the same number of architectures as in sarge, it included" -> "the same
number of architectures as in sarge: it included"

"The building has burnt to the ground. The fire department has given up
every hope on protecting" -> "The building burnt to the ground. The fire
department gave up hope on protecting"


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