[PATCH] Fix a typo in the Etch Release Notes: "the upgrade" may well be "then upgrade"
Hi,
the recommended way to install &releasename; is to first install
a (minimal) woody system, the upgrade to &oldreleasename; and finally to
&releasename;.
may well be
the recommended way to install &releasename; is to first install
a (minimal) woody system, then upgrade to &oldreleasename; and finally to
&releasename;.
or
the recommended way to install &releasename; is to first install
a (minimal) woody system, and then upgrade to &oldreleasename; and finally to
&releasename;.
If I am correct (and if it is OK to fix a trivial mistake under the
freeze), could you please apply this patch?
Many thanks,
-nori
Index: release-notes.en.sgml
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RCS file: /cvs/debian-doc/ddp/manuals.sgml/release-notes/en/release-notes.en.sgml,v
retrieving revision 1.279
diff -u -r1.279 release-notes.en.sgml
--- release-notes.en.sgml 5 Apr 2007 10:49:29 -0000 1.279
+++ release-notes.en.sgml 5 Apr 2007 19:25:49 -0000
@@ -653,7 +653,7 @@
support the SRM console. Be sure to switch your system to SRM before
starting the installation. If your machine supports only the AlphaBIOS/ARC
console, the recommended way to install &releasename; is to first install
- a (minimal) woody system, the upgrade to &oldreleasename; and finally to
+ a (minimal) woody system, then upgrade to &oldreleasename; and finally to
&releasename;. For more information about the different consoles please
read the references on the <url id="http://www.debian.org/ports/alpha"
name="Debian alpha port web pages">.
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