Bug#406161: release-notes
Hi Clytie,
On Tue, Jan 09, 2007 at 05:43:27PM +1030, Clytie Siddall wrote:
> While updating my translation of the release-notes, I have
> encountered the following typos, which I thought you might like to
> fix before the next release.
It would be nice if you could send a proper patch the next time, maybe
even two (one with real stuff which needs to be fixed and the optional
part which needs to be discussed). Your data is just hard to read,
contains characters I have never seen, ...
> po:95
> Translator: ③ type: <p></p>
> Original: ⌘0 You have to make sure before upgrading your system
> that you have sufficient
> hard disk space when you start the full system upgrade described in
> <ref id=
> \"upgrading_other\">. You will first need enough hard disk on the
> filesystem
> partition that holds <file>/var/</file> to temporarily download the
> packages
> that will be installed in your system. After the download, you will
> probably
> need more space in other filesystem partitions in order to both install
> upgraded packages (which might contain bigger binaries or more data)
> and new
> packages that will be pulled in for the upgrade. If your system does not
> have sufficient space you might end up with an incomplete upgrade
> that might
> be difficult to recover from.
>
> +
> Before upgrading your system, you have to make sure you have
> sufficient hard-disk space to start the full-system upgrade described
> in <ref id=\"upgrading_other\">. To start with, in the filesystem
> partition containing <file>/var/</file>, you need enough hard-disk
> space to download temporarily all the packages which will be
> installed on your system. After the download, in other filesystem
> partitions, you will probably need more space to install both the
> upgraded packages (which can contain larger binaries or more data)
> and the new packages required for the upgrade. If your system does
> not have enough space for these processes, you may end up with an
> incomplete upgrade, a difficult situation to fix.
I really do not understand what you propose here. Where are the typos,
...?
> 3.
> po:96
> Translator: ③ type: <p></p>
> Original: ⌘0 Both <prgn>aptitude</prgn> and <prgn>apt</prgn> will
> show you detailed
> information of the disk space needed for the installation. You can
> see this
> estimate before executing the actual upgrade running:
>
> - information of the disk space
> + information about the disk space
Someone changed this already to "information on the disk space". A
reference to a line number such as in patch files against
release-notes.en.sgml would be useful for a check ...
> - You can see this estimate before executing the actual upgrade running:
> + Before executing the upgrade, you can see this estimate by running:
OK.
> - cause linux-image-2.6 installations
> + cause <package>linux-image-2.6</package> installations
>
> ?
linux-image-2.6 is not a package but many start with linux-image-2.6,
so I do not change it for now.
OK, I need to stop now, it's not easy to find all source references
because of different line breaks. Send a patch and I will continue ...
Please check also again the committed patch.
Thanks,
Jens
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